Challenges— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I think history is the most challenging subject at school because, although the lessons include interesting stories, I have to memorize many details and timelines, which I find difficult.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达自己的观点，并用具体例子支持，同时注意词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Sometimes, when I feel bored with my current lifestyle, I like to challenge myself by trying new activities. For example, I once visited Beijing Street in Macao, which was a new experience for me.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer a life without too many challenges because they often come with risks that make me feel uncomfortable and stressed.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并用连接词使回答更有条理。

Ví dụ: When I face challenges, I first make a list of tasks based on their urgency and importance. Then, I focus on completing them one by one. Sometimes, I also ask others for help.

× I think it definitely history subject as although it is there are some interesting historical stories filled in lessons, we have to memorize details and timelines which are difficult for me.

✓ I think it is definitely the history subject as although there are some interesting historical stories in lessons, we have to memorize details and timelines which are difficult for me.

这里'subject'是单数，前面缺少系动词'is'，且需要加定冠词'the'来特指历史这门学科。此外，'there are'用于复数名词'interesting historical stories'，'filled in lessons'表达不准确，改为'in lessons'更自然。

× Sometimes if I feel too boring to keep recent lifestyle, I will try. Doing something challenges.

✓ Sometimes if I feel too bored to keep my recent lifestyle, I will try doing something challenging.

'feel too boring'应为'feel too bored'，因为这里是感受状态。'keep recent lifestyle'缺少所有格，改为'my recent lifestyle'。'I will try. Doing something challenges.'句子结构不完整，应合并为'I will try doing something challenging.'，'challenges'应为形容词形式'challenging'修饰'something'。

× For example, I tried the Beijing in Macao.

✓ For example, I tried Beijing in Macao.

'the Beijing'错误使用了定冠词，地名一般不加'the'。此外，'tried the Beijing in Macao'表达不清，可能想表达'我在澳门尝试了北京菜'或类似意思，需根据上下文调整。

× Not really. I don't expect my life filled with challenges, which means accompanied with some risk which made me feel uncomfortable and stressful.

✓ Not really. I don't expect my life to be filled with challenges, which means being accompanied by some risks that make me feel uncomfortable and stressed.

'expect my life filled with challenges'缺少不定式'to be'。'which means accompanied with some risk'缺少主语，改为'which means being accompanied by some risks'。'which made me feel'时态不一致，改为现在时'make me feel'。'stressful'形容词用错，描述人的感受应为'stressed'。

× When I have to face with the challenges, first I will make a list about what should I do according to the urgency and importance, next I will. Focus on the list the area for the to do it. Sometimes I need others help.

✓ When I have to face challenges, first I will make a list of what I should do according to urgency and importance. Next, I will focus on the areas in the list to do them. Sometimes I need others' help.

'face with'错误，正确用法是'face challenges'。'make a list about'应为'make a list of'。'what should I do'语序错误，陈述句应为'what I should do'。'Focus on the list the area for the to do it'结构混乱，改为'focus on the areas in the list to do them'。'others help'缺少所有格，改为'others' help'。