Challenges— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

Ví dụ: I think mathematics is the most challenging subject at school because it involves complex problem-solving and abstract concepts. For example, topics like algebra and geometry require logical and critical thinking skills.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như 'it's helped' thay vì 'it has helped'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và hoàn chỉnh câu cuối cùng. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I didn't like to challenge myself when I was shy, but now I enjoy it because it helps me grow and learn new skills. For instance, I set personal goals such as acquiring new knowledge and improving my fitness. Facing challenges also boosts my confidence and motivation.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, cần luyện tập để nói trôi chảy hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I didn't enjoy a challenging life when I was tired, but now I do because challenges push me to grow and improve my skills. Facing difficulties often helps me develop new abilities and gain confidence.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá tốt, có ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ như 'and and' và phát âm rõ ràng hơn để tăng tính tự nhiên.

Ví dụ: I usually handle challenges by staying calm and breaking problems into smaller, manageable parts. For example, when facing a tight deadline at work, I prioritize tasks and focus on one thing at a time to avoid feeling overwhelmed.

× Well to be honest I believe mathematics is the most challenging subject at school, especially my my school.

✓ Well to be honest I believe mathematics is the most challenging subject at school, especially at my school.

The phrase 'especially my my school' is missing the preposition 'at' before 'my school'. This is a prepositional phrase indicating location, so 'at' is necessary to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Umm well this is because it's involved com complex problem solving skill and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and critical thinking.

✓ Umm well this is because it involves complex problem-solving skills and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and critical thinking.

The verb 'involved' should be 'involves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'com complex' seems to be a typo and should be 'complex'. 'Problem solving skill' should be plural 'problem-solving skills' because it refers to multiple skills. Hyphenation is needed in 'problem-solving' as it is a compound adjective.

× Umm when I was shy it was not really.

✓ Umm when I was shy, it was not really.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'shy' to separate the clauses properly. Also, 'shy' seems to be a typo for 'shy' or 'shy' is likely incorrect in context; possibly 'shy' should be 'shy' or 'shy' is a mishearing. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, adding the comma is the correction.

× But nowadays I do enjoy challenging myself because it's helped me grow and learn new skill.

✓ But nowadays I do enjoy challenging myself because it has helped me grow and learn new skills.

The phrase 'it's helped' is a contraction of 'it has helped', which is correct, but 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because learning usually involves multiple skills.

× For example, I often set personal goals like learning a new knowledge and improving my fitness.

✓ For example, I often set personal goals like learning new knowledge and improving my fitness.

'Knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a new'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Facing challenge also boosts my confidence and makes me feel.

✓ Facing challenges also boosts my confidence and makes me feel good.

'Challenge' should be plural 'challenges' to match the context of facing multiple difficulties. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'good' completes the thought.

× Umm to be honest, when I was tried umm it's not really umm.

✓ Umm to be honest, when I was tired, umm it was not really.

'Tried' is incorrect; the correct past tense adjective is 'tired'. Also, 'it's not really' should be 'it was not really' to maintain past tense consistency.

× But nowadays yes I do enjoy living a life that filled with lots of challenge because they push me to grow and improve my skill.

✓ But nowadays yes I do enjoy living a life that is filled with lots of challenges because they push me to grow and improve my skills.

'Filled' needs the auxiliary verb 'is' to form the passive voice correctly. 'Challenge' should be plural 'challenges' to match 'lots of'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' as it refers to multiple abilities.

× Facing difficulty of often help me develop new skill and gain confidence.

✓ Facing difficulties often helps me develop new skills and gain confidence.

'Difficulty' should be plural 'difficulties' to match the context. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'facing difficulties'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'.

× Umm, I usually deal with challenges in daily life by staying calm and breaking the problem down into smaller and and manageable parts.

✓ Umm, I usually deal with challenges in daily life by staying calm and breaking the problem down into smaller and manageable parts.

The word 'and' is repeated twice; removing the duplicate 'and' corrects the sentence.