Challenges— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Thí sinh
To say, but I'll pick one, I'll say the autonomy subject must be the hardest one because we need to remember lots of different professional terms and the structure of the human body. So it's really hard to understand sometimes.
Giám khảo
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I I like to change myself because we need to step out of the comfort zone to improve myself. Then they can be better than before than yesterday. And uh, for example, I always like to learn some new subjects instead of following the old ones.
Giám khảo
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Thí sinh
And no, I don't think so. On the one hand, I know I have to admit the benefits of challenges which could push me to the higher level and develop me better, but I think it would be exhausted to face a lot of chances every day. I prefer ordinary life.
Giám khảo
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, most of the time I try to face the chances myself and but sometimes if I need a hand with that, then I'd like to ask for help with my friends and teachers. For example, if if I if I meet some difficult problems, then I'd like to ask.
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Part 1
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如'autonomy subject'可能是错误词汇，应为'anatomy subject'。建议使用更准确的词汇，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I think anatomy is the most challenging subject at school because it requires memorizing many professional terms and understanding the complex structure of the human body.
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如'I I'和'they can be better'。建议避免重复，注意主谓一致，并使用连贯的连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like to challenge myself because stepping out of my comfort zone helps me improve. For example, I often try to learn new subjects instead of sticking to the ones I already know.
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如'And no'和'it would be exhausted'。建议使用更准确的表达，避免口语化的连接词，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。
Ví dụ: No, I don't prefer a life full of challenges. Although challenges can help me improve, facing too many every day would be exhausting. I prefer a more ordinary and peaceful life.
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如'and but'和多次重复'if'。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连贯的连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Usually, I try to face challenges by myself, but if I need help, I ask my friends or teachers. For example, when I encounter difficult problems, I don't hesitate to seek their assistance.
Ngữ pháp
× I'll say the autonomy subject must be the hardest one because we need to remember lots of different professional terms and the structure of the human body.
✓ I'll say the anatomy subject must be the hardest one because we need to remember lots of different professional terms and the structures of the human body.
这里“structure”应使用复数形式“structures”，因为人体有多个结构，且前面提到了“lots of different professional terms”，暗示多个结构。
× I like to change myself because we need to step out of the comfort zone to improve myself.
✓ I like to change myself because I need to step out of my comfort zone to improve myself.
“step out of the comfort zone”应具体指“我的舒适区”，且前后主语不一致，需统一为第一人称。
× Then they can be better than before than yesterday.
✓ Then I can be better than before, better than yesterday.
“they”指代不明，应改为“I”，且“than”重复使用，需调整句子结构。
× I try to face the chances myself and but sometimes if I need a hand with that, then I'd like to ask for help with my friends and teachers.
✓ I try to face the challenges myself, but sometimes if I need a hand with that, then I'd like to ask for help from my friends and teachers.
“chances”应为“challenges”，且“ask for help with”应改为“ask for help from”，表示向某人寻求帮助。
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