Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Améliorez la clarté et la structure de votre réponse en corrigeant la grammaire et en évitant les répétitions. Utilisez des phrases complètes et reliez vos idées avec des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et naturelle.

Ví dụ: Last Christmas, I traveled to Vienna, Austria, and Budapest, Hungary with my friends. We spent about a week exploring these two beautiful cities, which was very relaxing. I really enjoyed the trip, especially after finishing my final exams.

Gợi ý: Clarifiez votre réponse en utilisant des phrases plus simples et correctes grammaticalement. Ajoutez des mots de liaison pour mieux organiser vos idées et évitez les erreurs qui peuvent nuire à la compréhension.

Ví dụ: Yes, I absolutely love holidays because they give me a break from worrying about deadlines. Also, I can reunite with my friends and family. Sometimes, we travel to other cities or simply spend quality time together.

Gợi ý: Améliorez la précision et la fluidité de votre réponse en corrigeant les erreurs grammaticales et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées. Soyez plus spécifique dans la description des activités.

Ví dụ: I like the Tet Festival the best because it is a very important traditional holiday in Vietnam. During this time, people visit relatives, exchange gifts, and give lucky money to wish each other a prosperous new year. This holiday brings my family together and creates a joyful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Corrigez les erreurs de vocabulaire et de grammaire, et utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente. Soyez précis dans vos descriptions pour mieux exprimer vos idées.

Ví dụ: On holidays, I usually take a break to relax after busy days at work. I spend quality time with my friends and family, where we talk about our daily routines and share news. Sometimes, we go out to enjoy meals or watch movies, which helps me recharge and feel closer to them.

Gợi ý: Améliorez la grammaire et la structure des phrases. Utilisez des expressions plus naturelles et évitez les répétitions pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide.

Ví dụ: Yes, I find spending my days at home very relaxing and comforting because I am a homebody. I enjoy spending time alone, watching my favorite movies, baking cakes, and relaxing under a blanket.

Gợi ý: Clarifiez votre réponse en corrigeant les erreurs et en structurant mieux vos phrases. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour exprimer clairement vos préférences et les raisons.

Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer a leisurely holiday because I love the quietness. I enjoy spending time alone or with my family, sharing meals and relaxing together.

Gợi ý: Améliorez la prononciation et la grammaire, et évitez les erreurs de vocabulaire. Organisez votre réponse avec des phrases claires et utilisez des exemples précis pour soutenir votre opinion.

Ví dụ: I personally prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy lively atmospheres and social interactions. For example, the Tet Festival in Vietnam is very exciting, as families and friends gather to celebrate, exchange lucky money, and give gifts symbolizing good luck and prosperity for the new year.

× My last holiday was the Christmas an I went to Austria, Vienna an Hungary, Budapest with my friends with spent about a week in these two cities an it was so relaxing.

✓ My last holiday was Christmas, and I went to Vienna, Austria, and Budapest, Hungary with my friends. We spent about a week in these two cities, and it was so relaxing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'an' instead of 'and' to connect clauses and items in a list. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and run-on. Correct conjunctions and punctuation are needed to separate ideas clearly.

× After my final exam and I really enjoy the trip.

✓ After my final exam, I really enjoyed the trip.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the trip happened after the exam in the past, 'enjoy' should be in past tense 'enjoyed'. Also, 'and' is incorrectly used and should be removed or replaced with a comma.

× Yes, I absolutely love the holidays because as the time that I can't do anything without worry about my deadlines an I can also reunite with my friends or my family.

✓ Yes, I absolutely love the holidays because it is the time when I don't have to worry about my deadlines, and I can also reunite with my friends or my family.

The phrase 'because as the time that' is incorrect; it should be 'because it is the time when'. Also, 'can't do anything without worry' is awkward and should be 'don't have to worry'. The conjunction 'an' should be 'and'.

× We can go to the other city to travel or just spend time together.

✓ We can go to other cities to travel or just spend time together.

'The other city' implies a specific city previously mentioned, but here it is general. 'Other cities' is more appropriate. Also, 'to travel' is acceptable but 'travel' alone is more natural.

× I would choose the Tet Festival, which is one of the most important traditional holidays in my country Vietnam.

✓ I would choose the Tet Festival, which is one of the most important traditional holidays in my country, Vietnam.

A comma is needed before 'Vietnam' to separate the appositive phrase. This clarifies that Vietnam is the country being referred to.

× Alike it because there are many exciting activities such as visiting relatives, giving gives an exchanging lucky money to wish each other a prosperous new year.

✓ I like it because there are many exciting activities such as visiting relatives, giving gifts, and exchanging lucky money to wish each other a prosperous new year.

'Alike it' is incorrect; it should be 'I like it'. 'Giving gives an exchanging' is incorrect; it should be 'giving gifts and exchanging'. The conjunction 'an' should be 'and'.

× This holiday brings my family together and creates A joyful at most.

✓ This holiday brings my family together and creates a joyful atmosphere at most.

'A joyful at most' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'a joyful atmosphere at most' or 'a joyful mood' to make sense.

× On holidays, I usually take a break to relax after a busy days at work.

✓ On holidays, I usually take a break to relax after busy days at work.

'A busy days' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'days'. Removing 'a' corrects the agreement.

× I also spend quality time with my friends and my family, where we often talk about our daily routines and share the lattice Niels.

✓ I also spend quality time with my friends and my family, where we often talk about our daily routines and share the latest news.

'Lattice Niels' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'latest news'. Correcting to 'latest news' makes the sentence meaningful.

× Sometimes we go out together to enjoy meals or watch movies, which helps me recharge and flow feel closer to them.

✓ Sometimes we go out together to enjoy meals or watch movies, which helps me recharge and feel closer to them.

'Flow feel' is incorrect; it should be 'feel'. The extra word 'flow' is likely a typo or mishearing.

× Yes, I reckon spending my days at home is actually really relaxing and comforting to me because I'm a homebody person so I really enjoy spend time alone, enjoy my favorite movies, baking my cakes and enjoy in blankets.

✓ Yes, I reckon spending my days at home is actually really relaxing and comforting to me because I'm a homebody, so I really enjoy spending time alone, enjoying my favorite movies, baking my cakes, and enjoying being in blankets.

'Enjoy spend time' should be 'enjoy spending time' to use the gerund form after 'enjoy'. Similarly, parallel structure requires 'enjoying' for the other activities. 'Enjoy in blankets' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoying being in blankets' or 'enjoying being wrapped in blankets'.

× Personally, I prefer a leisurely Paula day because I love the quiet Nis so I really enjoy spending it alone or just with my family members because we can just. It a meal together share the lattice Neil in the daily life.

✓ Personally, I prefer a leisurely holiday because I love the quietness, so I really enjoy spending it alone or just with my family members because we can just eat a meal together and share the latest news in daily life.

'Paula day' is a mishearing of 'holiday'. 'Quiet Nis' should be 'quietness'. The sentence 'we can just. It a meal together share the lattice Neil' is fragmented and incorrect; it should be 'we can just eat a meal together and share the latest news'.

× Day. I personally prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoyed the lift LY asmus fear xan social interactions.

✓ I personally prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy lively and social interactions.

The sentence is fragmented and contains many errors. 'Day.' is extraneous. 'Enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoy' to match 'prefer'. 'Lift LY asmus fear xan' is a mishearing of 'lively and social'. Correcting these makes the sentence coherent.

× For example, the Tet Festival in Vietnam is a very exciting holiday where families and friends gather to celebrate.

✓ For example, the Tet Festival in Vietnam is a very exciting holiday where families and friends gather to celebrate.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× People exchanged lucky money and gift gifts, which symbolize good luck and prosperity for the new here.

✓ People exchange lucky money and gifts, which symbolize good luck and prosperity for the new year.

'Exchanged' is past tense but the sentence describes a general fact, so present tense 'exchange' is appropriate. 'Gift gifts' is redundant; 'gifts' suffices. 'New here' is a mishearing of 'new year'.