Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state the place you visited and explain why you liked it using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I went to a hill station for my last holiday because I enjoy being close to nature and spending quality time with my family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like holidays because I can relax at hotels, spend time with my family and friends, and visit new places.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Clearly name the public holiday you like and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I like Dashain the most because during this holiday, my family and relatives gather together, and we enjoy celebrating with each other.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to clearly state your activities during holidays and explain why you enjoy them, using correct sentence structure.

Ví dụ: During holidays, I prefer traveling to different places because I like to explore new cultures and learn new things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to clearly express why you like spending time at home, using simple and correct sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like spending my day at home because I can relax, enjoy the sunlight, and not worry about any responsibilities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state your preference and explain your reasons in a coherent way.

Ví dụ: I prefer a busy holiday because I don't like feeling bored, and staying active helps me forget about stress from work or study.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but informal. Try to use more appropriate vocabulary and provide specific examples to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy adventurous activities like hiking and playing games with my cousins, family, and friends.

× Actually, I went to my bill is on my last holiday because I like to sit between a nature and enjoy my time with my family.

✓ Actually, I went to my village on my last holiday because I like to sit in nature and enjoy my time with my family.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect structure, including 'my bill is' which seems to be a typo for 'my village'. Also, 'sit between a nature' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in nature'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually yes, I do like holiday because in hotel at holiday I can enjoy my time with my family, friends and visit different places so. Yes.

✓ Actually, yes, I do like holidays because in a hotel during holidays I can enjoy my time with my family and friends and visit different places.

The prepositions 'in hotel at holiday' are incorrect. The correct usage is 'in a hotel during holidays'. Also, 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I like the site because in that time we get to we have a get together with my family members, cousins an relatives and we enjoy a lot so I do like the same.

✓ I like the site because at that time we have a get-together with my family members, cousins, and relatives and we enjoy a lot, so I do like it.

The phrase 'in that time' should be 'at that time'. The pronoun 'we get to we have' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified. Also, 'an relatives' should be 'and relatives'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× On holiday I prefer going on on going for a travel and visit different places so I can explore. Precious I know about this.

✓ On holidays, I prefer going on travel and visiting different places so I can explore. Previously, I did not know about this.

The phrase 'going on on going for a travel' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'going on travel'. Also, 'precious' is likely a typo for 'previously'. The verb forms and prepositions are corrected for grammatical accuracy.

× Actually, yes, I do like to spend my day at home because we can get some rays and we don't have to take any intention.

✓ Actually, yes, I do like to spend my day at home because we can get some sun rays and we don't have to pay any attention.

The phrase 'take any intention' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pay any attention'. Also, specifying 'sun rays' clarifies the meaning. The sentence is corrected for proper idiomatic expressions.

× While I could not get bored like hell. Any stress about a study or work? So I do prefer. Busy holiday?

✓ I could not get bored at all and have no stress about study or work, so I do prefer a busy holiday.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They are combined and restructured into a coherent sentence with correct grammar and meaning.

× I prefer exciting holiday because I am crazy person and I like doing an exciting thing at holiday with my cousins, family, friends.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday because I am a crazy person and I like doing exciting things on holidays with my cousins, family, and friends.

The article 'an' is missing before 'exciting holiday'. Also, 'a crazy person' needs the article 'a'. 'An exciting thing at holiday' should be 'exciting things on holidays'. Articles and plural forms are corrected for grammatical accuracy.