Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, clarify your answer by directly stating the place and purpose, and avoid informal abbreviations like 'fam'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I went to the shopping mall on my last holiday because I needed to buy several makeup products. After shopping, I spent quality time with my family, which made the holiday very enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect reasons logically. Replace 'disseminate myself' with a more appropriate phrase like 'relax' or 'entertain myself'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like holidays because they are the best part of my week. During holidays, I feel free from work and studies, which helps me relax. Additionally, I enjoy watching movies featuring my favourite celebrities to entertain myself.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'lies the value of freedom' and 'vive'. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Ví dụ: Although there are many public holidays throughout the year, my favourite is Independence Day because it celebrates freedom. Moreover, everyone has a day off, which brings a sense of happiness and unity.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect activities. Replace 'making painting' with 'painting' and 'wild phone' with 'mobile phone'.

Ví dụ: On holidays, I usually spend time with my family and watch movies featuring my favourite celebrities. Additionally, I enjoy painting and often watch short videos on my mobile phone.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Replace unclear phrases like 'buy of our own place' with 'comfort of my own space'. Keep sentences complete and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like spending my day at home because it provides the comfort of my own space. I feel relaxed there, and the environment is tailored to my preferences.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference logically. Replace unclear phrases like 'meaning of the holiday is lesser' and 'recipe in it' with clearer expressions.

Ví dụ: I prefer a leisurely holiday because holidays provide a chance to rest and have free time. Since we are usually busy with work or studies, I find relaxing holidays more comfortable and refreshing.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more varied vocabulary. Avoid repeating 'depends' and try to combine ideas more smoothly.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood and the weather. If I need rest, I prefer a peaceful holiday; however, if I want to have fun and pursue my passions, I choose an exciting holiday.

× I went to the shopping center on my last holiday because, uh, I had to buy a lot of stuff off my makeup.

✓ I went to the shopping center on my last holiday because, uh, I had to buy a lot of makeup stuff.

The phrase 'stuff off my makeup' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'makeup stuff' or 'makeup products'. This is a vocabulary and word order issue rather than a strict grammar tense issue, but it affects clarity. The past tense 'had to buy' is correct here.

× it was really enjoyable holiday for me.

✓ it was a really enjoyable holiday for me.

The noun 'holiday' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× And after coming from the mall, I spent some time with my fam.

✓ And after coming from the mall, I spent some time with my family.

The word 'fam' is informal slang and not appropriate in formal speech or writing. The correct pronoun is 'family'.

× I think holidays is the best part of my entire week because I feel free from my work, from my studies and stress free from pressurized environment at my workplace as well as I can disseminate myself by watching my favorite celebrities, movies, et cetera.

✓ I think holidays are the best part of my entire week because I feel free from my work, from my studies and stress-free from the pressurized environment at my workplace as well as I can relax by watching my favorite celebrities, movies, et cetera.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'disseminate myself' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'relax'. Added 'the' before 'pressurized environment' as it is a specific environment.

× I can disseminate myself by watching my favorite celebrities, movies, et cetera.

✓ I can relax by watching my favorite celebrities, movies, et cetera.

The verb 'disseminate' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'relax'. The preposition 'by' is correctly used here.

× what my favorite public holiday is the Independence Day because at that time it lies the value of freedom too and we all had holiday on that day as well.

✓ my favorite public holiday is Independence Day because at that time it highlights the value of freedom too and we all have a holiday on that day as well.

'Independence Day' does not need 'the' before it. 'Lies' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'highlights' or 'symbolizes'. 'Had holiday' should be 'have a holiday' to indicate a recurring event.

× So it gives me the both vive of freedom and happiness on the same.

✓ So it gives me both the vibe of freedom and happiness at the same time.

The word 'vive' is a misspelling of 'vibe'. The phrase 'on the same' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at the same time'.

× There are certain things to do on holiday and on my holidays I usually spend some time with my family and watch my movies on my favorite celebrities.

✓ There are certain things to do on holidays and on my holidays I usually spend some time with my family and watch movies of my favorite celebrities.

The phrase 'watch my movies on my favorite celebrities' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate movies featuring favorite celebrities.

× As well as I really love to making painting so I prefer some time in making painting and I watch reels at my wild phone.

✓ I also really love making paintings, so I prefer to spend some time painting and I watch reels on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'love to making painting' is incorrect; it should be 'love making paintings'. 'Prefer some time in making painting' is awkward; 'prefer to spend some time painting' is correct. 'Wild phone' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'mobile phone'. 'Watch reels on my mobile phone' is correct.

× I love to spend my day at home because home is the best place for me because it gives me the buy of our own place and I really feel comfortable at my home as well as my home is made according to my.

✓ I love to spend my day at home because home is the best place for me as it gives me the feeling of having my own place and I really feel comfortable at home as well as my home is made according to my preferences.

The phrase 'gives me the buy of our own place' is incorrect; it should be 'gives me the feeling of having my own place'. 'At my home' can be simplified to 'at home'. The sentence was incomplete; added 'preferences' to complete the thought.

× I prefer leisurely holiday because I think the meaning of the holiday is lesser and spare time so we always stay busy at work at in our study.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because I think the meaning of a holiday is leisure and spare time, so we are always busy at work or in our studies.

'Leisurely holiday' needs the article 'a'. 'Lesser' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'leisure'. 'At in our study' is incorrect; it should be 'at work or in our studies'.

× So I think holiday is the part which gives us lesser and I prefer the leisurely because I feel comfortable and recipe in it.

✓ So I think a holiday is the part which gives us leisure and I prefer the leisurely one because I feel comfortable and relaxed in it.

'Gives us lesser' is incorrect; it should be 'gives us leisure'. 'Recipe' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'relaxed'. Added 'a' before 'holiday' and 'one' after 'leisurely' for clarity.

× If I want to take rest then I will prefer the peaceful holiday.

✓ If I want to rest, then I will prefer a peaceful holiday.

The phrase 'take rest' is less common; 'rest' alone is sufficient. Added comma after 'rest' for clarity. 'The peaceful holiday' should be 'a peaceful holiday' as it is one of many possible holidays.

× If I want to really enjoy something and I am passionate about something, then I will prefer the exciting holiday.

✓ If I want to really enjoy something and I am passionate about it, then I will prefer an exciting holiday.

'The exciting holiday' should be 'an exciting holiday' as it is one of many. Replaced second 'something' with 'it' to avoid repetition.