Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use the past tense correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I spent my last holiday at home because I enjoy spending time with my family and friends. We organized a small picnic together, which was really enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Focus on correct grammar and pronouns, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like holidays because they are relaxing amidst my busy life. During holidays, I can spend more peaceful time with my family and friends.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and add specific details.

Ví dụ: I like the Christmas holiday best because it is a peaceful time when I get the chance to meet friends and family, exchange gifts, and enjoy quality time together.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: On holidays, I mostly spend time with my family. We often organize small picnics and get together with friends to talk and enjoy each other's company.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and word choice for naturalness. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy spending my days at home because it is very relaxing. I spend time with my family and friends, and sometimes I watch TV, which I find enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer a leisurely holiday because it helps me relax from my busy life. I like spending time at home with my family and friends during such holidays.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I prefer peaceful holidays because work is often stressful. During holidays, I enjoy relaxing and feeling calm, which helps me recharge.

× I spend my time last holiday at home because I like to spend time with my family and my friends.

✓ I spent my time last holiday at home because I like to spend time with my family and my friends.

The sentence refers to a past event ('last holiday'), so the verb should be in the past tense ('spent') instead of present tense ('spend').

× We get together and organize our little picnic at home.

✓ We got together and organized our little picnic at home.

Since the sentence describes a past event, the verbs should be in the past tense ('got' and 'organized') instead of present tense ('get' and 'organize').

× Yes, I like holidays because it's more relaxing to me in my busy life.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because they are more relaxing to me in my busy life.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'it's' refers to singular, which is incorrect here.

× We spend more time to with with her family and her friends.

✓ We spend more time with our family and our friends.

The phrase 'spend more time to with with' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with' and 'her' should be 'our' to match the speaker's perspective.

× There is more peace.

✓ There is more peace.

This sentence is correct as it stands; 'There is' is appropriate for singular uncountable noun 'peace'.

× I like Christmas holiday, it's it's really peaceful days.

✓ I like the Christmas holiday; it's really peaceful days.

'Christmas holiday' is singular, so 'it's' is correct, but 'days' is plural, which conflicts. It should be 'peaceful day' or 'peaceful days' with plural subject. Also, 'the' is needed before 'Christmas holiday'.

× We chance to meet a friend and family and exchange gifts and spend time.

✓ We have a chance to meet friends and family, exchange gifts, and spend time together.

'Chance' needs a verb like 'have' before it. Also, 'a friend and family' should be 'friends and family' for general meaning. Added 'together' for clarity.

× Mostly I like to spend time with my family on holidays and be organized a little bit picnic and get to get together with friends and spend time and talk to each other and.

✓ Mostly, I like to spend time with my family on holidays and organize a little picnic, get together with friends, spend time, and talk to each other.

The phrase 'be organized a little bit picnic' is incorrect; it should be 'organize a little picnic'. Also, 'get to get together' is redundant; 'get together' suffices. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I like to spend time at home because it's really relax full to me and I spend time to with my family and friends and sometimes I like to watch TV at home and it's really enjoy.

✓ Yes, I like to spend time at home because it's really relaxing to me, and I spend time with my family and friends. Sometimes I like to watch TV at home, and it's really enjoyable.

'Relax full' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'relaxing'. 'Spend time to with' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time with'. 'It's really enjoy' should be 'it's really enjoyable'.

× Actually, I like to luxury holiday because it's a really relaxed to me in my busy life.

✓ Actually, I like a luxury holiday because it's really relaxing to me in my busy life.

'Like to luxury holiday' is incorrect; it should be 'like a luxury holiday'. 'It's a really relaxed' should be 'it's really relaxing' to describe the effect on the speaker.

× I like to spend time with my friend and family at home sometime I.

✓ I like to spend time with my friends and family at home sometimes.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'family'. 'Sometime I' is incomplete and should be 'sometimes'.

× I like to spend a peaceful holidays because doing work it's really stressful days and when we spend holidays I like peaceful holiday.

✓ I like to spend peaceful holidays because working is really stressful, and when we spend holidays, I like peaceful ones.

'A peaceful holidays' is incorrect; 'holidays' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Doing work it's really stressful days' is awkward; 'working is really stressful' is better. 'I like peaceful holiday' should be 'I like peaceful ones' to refer back to holidays.

× It's feel me very relaxed and enjoy.

✓ It makes me feel very relaxed and happy.

'It's feel me' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'It makes me feel'. 'Enjoy' is a verb and should be replaced with an adjective like 'happy' to fit the sentence.