Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the place and your feelings, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Last summer holidays, I went to the Maldives with my husband and two kids. The scenery was mesmerizing, with beautiful mountains and clear waters. It made me very happy and uplifted my mood throughout the trip.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please provide a complete and coherent response with a clear reason why you like holidays. Use linking words to explain how holidays affect you.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I like holidays because they help me relax and recharge. After a hectic schedule, holidays encourage me to be more productive and refreshed when I return to work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but needs better structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific examples of activities you enjoy on national holidays.

Ví dụ: I like national holidays the best because everyone enjoys visiting different places. For example, on these days, museums and national parks often offer free entry, which makes it easier to explore and have fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Please complete your sentences and explain why you enjoy these activities. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: On holidays, especially Fridays, I mostly stay at home and enjoy some 'me time' by watching Netflix while munching on snacks. This helps uplift my mood and prepares me for the upcoming week.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but incomplete. Try to finish your sentences and add reasons why you like spending time at home. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Of course, I enjoy spending time at home. I usually sit in my cozy bed, watch Netflix, and munch on my favorite chocolate with a sip of coffee. This helps me relax and feel comfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of your favorite activities during leisurely holidays.

Ví dụ: I prefer leisurely holidays because they enhance my mood and make me more productive. During leisure time, I enjoy doing my favorite activities, which I often miss during busy weekdays due to my hectic schedule.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Provide a clear preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer peaceful holidays rather than exciting ones because they allow me to relax and enjoy my favorite activities. Since I usually have a hectic schedule, peaceful holidays help me recharge effectively.

× Last summer holidays I went to Maldives with my husband and two kids.

✓ Last summer holiday I went to the Maldives with my husband and two kids.

The phrase 'last summer holidays' is incorrect because 'holiday' should be singular when referring to a specific period. Also, 'Maldives' requires the definite article 'the' as it is a proper noun for a group of islands.

× The view in my lives is very mesmerizing and the mountains, the waters, it, it was very It was making me very happy and it was uplifting my mood.

✓ The view in my life is very mesmerizing, and the mountains and the waters were very beautiful. It made me very happy and uplifted my mood.

The word 'lives' is incorrect; it should be 'life' to refer to the speaker's experience. The sentence structure is confusing and uses 'it' redundantly. Also, verb tenses should be consistent in past tense to match the context.

× I want to.

✓ I wanted to.

The phrase 'I want to' is incomplete and does not fit the past context. Using 'wanted to' correctly expresses past intention.

× I love to go on holidays because it enhance my, it has enhance my and it also and then after it encouraged me to be more productive after the hectic of schedule.

✓ I love to go on holidays because it enhances me, it has enhanced me, and it also encourages me to be more productive after a hectic schedule.

The verbs 'enhance' and 'encouraged' need to agree with the subject and tense. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' for third person singular present tense. 'Has enhance' should be 'has enhanced' (past participle). 'Encouraged' should be 'encourages' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So I think day is very essential for.

✓ So I think holidays are very essential for me.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. 'Day' should be plural 'holidays' to match the context, and the sentence needs an object to complete the thought.

× I think national festival, national holiday are the best because everyone enjoy by visiting different places because on that day everything will be of free, free entry to the museums, to the to the National Park.

✓ I think national festivals and national holidays are the best because everyone enjoys visiting different places. On those days, everything is free, including entry to museums and the National Park.

'National festival' and 'national holiday' should be plural to refer generally. 'Everyone enjoy' should be 'everyone enjoys' for subject-verb agreement. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× As on Fridays, I mostly stay at home and enjoy some me time in my room watching Netflix I'm munching on.

✓ On Fridays, I mostly stay at home and enjoy some me time in my room watching Netflix while munching on snacks.

The phrase 'As on Fridays' is incorrect; 'On Fridays' is appropriate. The sentence is incomplete and needs a direct object after 'munching on'.

× It is the best thing I can do because I it uplifts my mood and it has me to the mood connective for the next.

✓ It is the best thing I can do because it uplifts my mood and helps me stay positive for the next day.

The sentence has redundant and unclear pronouns. 'I it' is incorrect. The phrase 'has me to the mood connective' is unclear and corrected to a clearer expression.

× I am very much fascinated upon spending time at home.

✓ I am very much fascinated by spending time at home.

The preposition 'upon' is incorrect here; 'fascinated by' is the correct collocation.

× I usually sit in my cozy bed and watch Netflix while munching on my favorite chocolate and a sip of coffee.

✓ I usually sit in my cozy bed and watch Netflix while munching on my favorite chocolate and sipping coffee.

'A sip of coffee' is awkward in this context; 'sipping coffee' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× I prefer leisurely because it makes me more productive and it enhance my mood.

✓ I prefer leisurely holidays because they make me more productive and enhance my mood.

'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject or 'they enhance' if plural. Also, specifying 'leisurely holidays' clarifies the meaning.

× In leisure time, I mostly prefer doing all my favorite activities which as frequent.

✓ In my leisure time, I mostly prefer doing all my favorite activities which are frequent.

The phrase 'which as frequent' is incorrect; it should be 'which are frequent' to agree with plural 'activities'.

× I don't get enough time in the weekdays because of my hectic schedule so I prefer leisure.

✓ I don't get enough time on weekdays because of my hectic schedule, so I prefer leisure.

The correct preposition is 'on weekdays' not 'in the weekdays'.

× To be honest, I prefer peaceful holidays is there a instead of exciting one as I really get time to be in a peaceful place with my favorite activities because I usually have a hectic schedule.

✓ To be honest, I prefer peaceful holidays instead of exciting ones because I really get time to be in a peaceful place with my favorite activities since I usually have a hectic schedule.

The phrase 'is there a instead of' is incorrect and replaced with 'instead of'. Also, conjunctions are adjusted for clarity and correctness.

× So we gonna come holiday holiday allow me to be more recharged.

✓ So going on holiday allows me to be more recharged.

The phrase 'we gonna come holiday holiday' is incorrect and unclear. Corrected to 'going on holiday' to express the intended meaning.