Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'last dead holiday'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: I went to a shooting park with my friends during the last holiday because we wanted to relax after a stressful year of study. The park is located in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, and it offers a mix of Vietnamese culture and entertainment.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên tránh dùng từ ngữ không trang trọng như 'Oh yeah'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn về những địa điểm bạn thích đến.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy holidays because I don't have to attend school or do homework. I can spend time doing my hobbies like playing games and reading books. Moreover, I often visit popular places in my country, such as museums or parks.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn cần nêu rõ tên ngày lễ yêu thích và giải thích cụ thể hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: My favorite public holiday is Tet, the Vietnamese New Year. During this time, I don't have to go to school or do homework. Also, I receive lucky money from my parents and relatives, which I can save or spend on something special.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy mô tả thêm về những địa điểm bạn đến để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: On holidays, I usually play games with my friends or my brother. In addition, I visit popular places in my area, such as Benton Market and Independence Palace, where I enjoy the local culture and food.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu mạch lạc và có nhiều tiếng ừ, à không cần thiết. Hãy tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết và hoàn thành câu trả lời với cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like spending my days at home because I prefer indoor activities to outdoor ones. At home, I usually surf the internet or play games, which help me relax.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'like to lying' nên là 'like lying'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I don't want to be involved in busy activities like cleaning the house or preparing food. I enjoy lying on my bed and doing whatever I like.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng vì bạn không nói rõ bạn thích loại kỳ nghỉ nào. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer a peaceful holiday because it allows me to feel comfortable and relaxed. I can take my time and spend quality moments with my family.

× I went to shooting park with my friends during last dead holiday because we wanted to rewind after a stressful year of study.

✓ I went to the shooting park with my friends during the last Tet holiday because we wanted to relax after a stressful year of study.

The phrase 'last dead holiday' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'the last Tet holiday' to specify the Vietnamese Lunar New Year holiday. Also, 'rewind' is not appropriate here; 'relax' fits better. Additionally, 'shooting park' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× This park is in Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam.

✓ This park is in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam.

The phrase 'in Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam' is redundant. It's more natural to say 'in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam' without repeating 'in'.

× Although in my country there there are a lot of public holidays, I my favorite holidays is that.

✓ Although there are a lot of public holidays in my country, my favorite holiday is that one.

The sentence has repeated words 'there there' and 'I my' which are errors. Also, 'holidays' should be singular 'holiday' to agree with 'my favorite'. The phrase 'is that' is incomplete; adding 'one' clarifies the meaning.

× Also, I can receive lucky money from my parents and relatives so I can spend that money for.

✓ Also, I can receive lucky money from my parents and relatives, so I can spend that money.

The phrase 'spend that money for' is incorrect; 'for' is unnecessary here. The sentence should end with 'spend that money'.

× On holidays, I usually play games with my friends or my brother, plus I also go to some popular places in my living area such as Benton Market or Independence Palace.

✓ On holidays, I usually play games with my friends or my brother, and I also go to some popular places in my local area such as Ben Thanh Market or Independence Palace.

The phrase 'living area' is incorrect; 'local area' is more appropriate. Also, 'Benton Market' is likely a misspelling of 'Ben Thanh Market'. The conjunction 'plus' is informal; 'and' is better here.

× I like to spend my day at home umm. The reason it is that I prefer indoors activities rather than outdoors. Outdoors 1 umm At home I usually surf the net umm or play games. And.

✓ I like to spend my day at home. The reason is that I prefer indoor activities rather than outdoor ones. At home, I usually surf the net or play games.

The phrase 'indoors activities' should be 'indoor activities' (adjective form). 'Outdoors 1 umm' is unclear and should be removed. The sentence fragments and filler words like 'umm' and 'And.' should be omitted for clarity.

× I like to lying on my bed and doing whatever I like.

✓ I like lying on my bed and doing whatever I like.

After 'like', the gerund form is used without 'to'. So 'like to lying' is incorrect; it should be 'like lying'.

× Honestly, I personally prefer a holiday, but the reason is that a peaceful holiday allows me to feel comfortable and relaxed so I can take my time and spend my time with my family.

✓ Honestly, I personally prefer a peaceful holiday because it allows me to feel comfortable and relaxed, so I can take my time and spend it with my family.

The phrase 'prefer a holiday' is vague; specifying 'a peaceful holiday' clarifies meaning. The sentence structure is improved by replacing 'but the reason is that' with 'because'. Also, 'spend my time' is repetitive; 'spend it' is more concise.