Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat langsung dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'uh'. Contoh: gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan lengkap dengan subjek, predikat, dan objek.

Ví dụ: I went to Bali last April. It was a great holiday because I spent most of my time on the beaches and exploring the local cuisine.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ví dụ: Of course, everyone loves holidays because they help refresh the mind, escape the hustle and bustle of the city, and reduce stress. Therefore, I believe everyone should enjoy holidays.

Gợi ý: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan berikan detail spesifik tentang hari libur favorit Anda.

Ví dụ: My favorite public holiday is the 'Little Fit 3' holiday in my country, which lasts about two weeks. During this time, most people travel and enjoy their holidays.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan lengkapi kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan efektif. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

Ví dụ: I usually travel outside my city to explore other countries or cities. I enjoy escaping the hustle and bustle of my city during holidays.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes spending the whole day at home is refreshing. I enjoy simple activities like lying in bed, eating good food, playing video games, and watching sports tournaments.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan hindari pengulangan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih natural dan jelas.

Ví dụ: I don't have a preference because I enjoy both types of holidays. Busy holidays make me feel fulfilled, while leisurely holidays help me relax. Both are enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

Ví dụ: I don't prefer one over the other because I enjoy both leisurely and exciting holidays. Sometimes, I need to relax my body, and other times, I like visiting exciting places like Bali.

× I want to Bali in about last April, uh, I found it very good, uh, holiday 'cause I spend all of my time, almost all of my time in beaches and exploring culinary around Bali.

✓ I went to Bali in last April, uh, I found it a very good holiday because I spent almost all of my time on beaches and exploring culinary around Bali.

The verb 'want' is incorrect for past action; it should be 'went' (past tense). Also, 'spend' should be 'spent' to match past tense. Preposition 'in beaches' should be 'on beaches'. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness.

× Of course, everyone's love holidays because it's kind of like refreshing your brain, escaping from hustle bustle of cities and also get our mind less pressure. So I think everyone has to loving holiday.

✓ Of course, everyone loves holidays because it's kind of like refreshing your brain, escaping from the hustle and bustle of cities and also getting our minds less pressured. So I think everyone has to love holidays.

Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone's love' should be 'everyone loves'. 'Get our mind less pressure' is incorrect; it should be 'getting our minds less pressured'. 'Has to loving holiday' should be 'has to love holidays'.

× In my country there is a little fit 3 holiday it about two weeks off public holidays and most of most all of the people spending their times like going to holidays and.

✓ In my country, there are about three holidays, totaling about two weeks off public holidays, and most people spend their time going on holidays.

'There is' should be 'there are' for plural 'holidays'. 'Little fit 3 holiday' is unclear; corrected to 'about three holidays'. 'Most of most all of the people spending their times' is incorrect; corrected to 'most people spend their time'.

× I usually go, uh, outside of my city, I usually looking for countries or cities to escape from the hustle bustle of my city. And also I'm, I'm kind of like hoping that I can go to some.

✓ I usually go outside of my city; I usually look for countries or cities to escape from the hustle and bustle of my city. Also, I'm kind of hoping that I can go to some.

'I usually looking' should be 'I usually look' to match present simple tense. 'Hoping that I can go to some' is incomplete but kept as is for context.

× Yes, sometimes pending all days in home is just like refreshing by doing simple things like lying in a bed, having a good food and playing some video games, watching some sports uh tournament. I think it's pretty good to spend your.

✓ Yes, sometimes spending all day at home is just like refreshing by doing simple things like lying in bed, having good food, and playing some video games, watching some sports tournaments. I think it's pretty good to spend your time.

'Pending all days in home' should be 'spending all day at home'. 'Lying in a bed' should be 'lying in bed'. 'Having a good food' should be 'having good food'. 'Watching some sports uh tournament' corrected to 'watching some sports tournaments'.

× I don't have any preference because I love both of them. Sometimes a busy holidays makes us fully fully filled with the holiday, fully filled with the time and also leisure holiday gives us a relaxing days. Both are lovely.

✓ I don't have any preference because I love both of them. Sometimes busy holidays make us fully filled with the holiday, fully filled with the time, and also leisure holidays give us relaxing days. Both are lovely.

'A busy holidays' is incorrect; should be 'busy holidays' (plural). 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject. 'Leisure holiday gives us a relaxing days' should be 'leisure holidays give us relaxing days'.

× None of them are my preference because I love a leisure holiday and an exciting holidays. Both are lovely because we need sometimes to just relaxing our body and sometimes to go to an exciting place like Bali.

✓ None of them is my preference because I love a leisure holiday and exciting holidays. Both are lovely because sometimes we need to just relax our body and sometimes to go to an exciting place like Bali.

'None of them are' should be 'None of them is' (singular). 'An exciting holidays' should be 'exciting holidays' (plural without article). 'Sometimes to just relaxing' should be 'sometimes to just relax'.