Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks a direct response. Try to start with a clear topic sentence stating the place you visited, then add specific details about the trip. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: For my last holiday, I went to France with my family on Valentine's Day in 2020. We planned the trip carefully and booked our tickets in advance. It was a memorable experience because we visited many famous places.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but repetitive. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific reasons why you like holidays. Try to avoid repeating the same words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like holidays because they give my family a chance to spend quality time together. We usually plan trips, book tickets, and celebrate special occasions, which makes holidays enjoyable and memorable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and incomplete. Clearly state which public holiday you like best and explain why with specific details. Avoid hesitation and filler words to make your answer more natural.

Ví dụ: My favorite public holiday is the summer vacation from school because it lasts one to two months. During this time, I can relax, travel, and spend more time with my family and friends.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is unclear and unorganized. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific activities you do on holidays. Try to speak more clearly and avoid unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: On holidays, I usually spend time with my family and friends, especially my niece and nephew. We visit beautiful places together, enjoy delicious food, and have fun activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Start with a clear statement about your preference, then explain reasons with specific details. Avoid filler words and incorrect grammar.

Ví dụ: I don't usually like to spend my day at home, but when I feel unwell or have a busy schedule, I prefer to stay home and complete my tasks. Otherwise, I enjoy going outside.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Clearly state your preference and explain why using specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer a leisurely holiday because my daily schedule is usually very busy and stressful. During holidays, I like to relax and recharge instead of having a tight schedule.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows your preference but is incomplete and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples of exciting holidays you enjoy. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy celebrations and having fun. For example, during festivals like Dandia and Rangina, we dance and celebrate with friends and family, which makes the holiday lively and enjoyable.

× For my last holiday when I planned and finally we got some tickets and travel arrangements.

✓ For my last holiday, I planned and finally we got some tickets and made travel arrangements.

The original sentence lacks proper past tense verb forms and structure. 'Planned' and 'got' are correct past tense verbs, but 'travel arrangements' needs a verb like 'made' to complete the action. The sentence should clearly express completed actions in the past.

× I, I use to go to France to, with my family and to.

✓ I used to go to France with my family.

The phrase 'use to' is incorrect; the correct past habitual form is 'used to'. Also, 'to' after 'France' is unnecessary, and the sentence ends abruptly. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× We family make a a family trips and arrange the tickets and other arrangement for the travelling and we go and celebrate together.

✓ We, as a family, make family trips, arrange the tickets and other arrangements for traveling, and we go and celebrate together.

The original sentence has plural and singular mismatches: 'a family trips' is incorrect; 'trips' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'arrangement' should be plural to match 'tickets'. The sentence is corrected for number agreement and clarity.

× There is certain, uh, holidays, uh, in my hometown, which I like to, uh, I like the best, Uh, but few, few of them is more, uh, good for me.

✓ There are certain holidays in my hometown which I like best, but a few of them are better for me.

'There is' should be 'There are' because 'holidays' is plural. 'Few' should be 'a few' to indicate some, and 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'them'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× I like to take the, uh, summer vacation of my schools, uh, because it's a, for a long time, like one to two months and we can do a lot in the.

✓ I like to take the summer vacation from my school because it's for a long time, like one to two months, and we can do a lot during it.

'Vacation of my schools' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from my school'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; 'during it' clarifies the time frame. Prepositions are corrected for natural English usage.

× Most of the time I enjoy a holiday with the being my to be been with my family's friends and my special with my niece and nephew and we go together to beautiful places to see it with them and then having foods, uh and enjoyments and so on.

✓ Most of the time, I enjoy holidays being with my family's friends and especially with my niece and nephew. We go together to beautiful places to see them, then have food and enjoy ourselves.

The original sentence has confusing pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'Being my to be been' is incorrect. 'Special with' should be 'especially with'. 'Having foods' is unnatural; 'have food' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× To be honest, not too much dumb but sometime when I feel not well.

✓ To be honest, not too much, but sometimes when I don't feel well.

'Not too much dumb' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'not too much' or 'not often'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence is corrected for quantifier and adverb usage.

× So I prefer to like my day in my home and as well when I'm engaged with a some hattic schedule.

✓ So I prefer to spend my day at home, especially when I'm engaged with a hectic schedule.

'Like my day in my home' is incorrect; 'spend my day at home' is correct. 'Engaged with a some hattic schedule' has errors: 'a some' is wrong, should be 'a hectic schedule'. Prepositions and articles are corrected.

× So I like to prefer to be at home and work for the my tasks otherwise rather than I like to visit outside.

✓ So I prefer to be at home and work on my tasks; otherwise, I like to go outside.

The phrase 'like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' suffices. 'Work for the my tasks' is incorrect; 'work on my tasks' is correct. 'Visit outside' is unnatural; 'go outside' is better. Pronouns and verb phrases are corrected.

× Umm, I prefer leisurely holiday rather than be busy because other of weeks of the days, uh all is hard schedule for us to talk to work and be unpunctual at the time to office or the investors, their academics.

✓ Umm, I prefer a leisurely holiday rather than a busy one because during other weeks and days, we have a hard schedule for work and sometimes are unpunctual to the office or meetings with investors and academics.

'Leisurely holiday' needs an article 'a'. 'Other of weeks of the days' is incorrect; corrected to 'during other weeks and days'. 'Talk to work' is unclear; replaced with 'work'. 'Be unpunctual at the time to office' is corrected to 'are unpunctual to the office'. Quantifiers and prepositions are corrected.

× But due to very high tech schedules is a very tough for us to have even.

✓ But due to very high-tech schedules, it is very tough for us to have any free time.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks subject. 'High tech schedules' should be hyphenated 'high-tech schedules'. 'Have even' is incomplete; 'have any free time' clarifies meaning. Prepositions and sentence structure are corrected.

× I honestly prefer an excited holiday, umm, like to celebrations, like to make fun in those holidays, especially on the special occasionally when I get the holiday and the special festival like Dandia, like uh, uh, Rangina.

✓ I honestly prefer an exciting holiday, like celebrations, where I can have fun, especially on special occasions when I get a holiday and during special festivals like Dandiya and Rangina.

'Excited holiday' is incorrect; 'exciting holiday' is correct adjective form. 'Like to celebrations' should be 'like celebrations'. 'Make fun' is informal; 'have fun' is better. 'Special occasionally' should be 'special occasions'. Adjectives and adverbs are corrected for proper usage.