Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、詳細が少なく、文のつながりが弱いです。例えば、なぜディズニーランドが特別なのか、どんな体験をしたのかを具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I went to Disneyland with my family because my daughter loves Disney characters. We enjoyed meeting Mickey Mouse and watching the parade, which made the trip very memorable.

Gợi ý: 言い淀みが多く、表現がやや冗長です。もっと簡潔に、理由を明確に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love holidays because they give me a chance to relax and spend quality time with my family, which makes me very happy.

Gợi ý: 文が途中で終わっているように感じられ、内容が不十分です。具体的な理由や感情を明確にし、文を完結させることが大切です。

Ví dụ: I like Christmas the best because the whole town is decorated with beautiful lights and Christmas trees, creating a joyful atmosphere that children especially enjoy.

Gợi ý: 言い淀みが多く、文の構成がやや不明瞭です。具体的な活動内容を整理して、接続詞を使いながら話すと良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: On holidays, I usually spend time with my family by going on trips. For example, we often visit Disneyland, and last time we went to the Canadian Rockies for hiking.

Gợi ý: 内容は明確ですが、「active and active」の繰り返しや言い淀みが目立ちます。語彙の繰り返しを避け、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I prefer going outside because I am an energetic person and I like to do exciting activities, especially to keep my three-year-old daughter entertained.

Gợi ý: 文が断片的で繰り返しがあり、流れが悪いです。文をつなげて、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer a busy holiday because I want to visit as many places as possible, even if the schedule is a bit tight.

Gợi ý: 理由は明確ですが、言い淀みが多く、語彙の幅が狭いです。より多様な表現を使い、流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer an exciting holiday because my three-year-old daughter is very energetic and dislikes staying at home; she enjoys going out and exploring new places.

× I love the Christmas decorations with beautiful lights and Christmas trees and also the kids seems to be so.

✓ I love the Christmas decorations with beautiful lights and Christmas trees and also the kids seem to be so.

The subject 'kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'seem' instead of 'seems' to agree in number.

× I can spend most of my time with my family, so that's why I love holiday.

✓ I can spend most of my time with my family, so that's why I love holidays.

The word 'holiday' in this context should be plural 'holidays' because it refers to holidays in general, not a specific holiday. Using the plural form is appropriate here.

× I prefer a exciting holiday because umm, my 3 year old daughter is really active and she doesn't like staying at home or like relaxing.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday because umm, my 3 year old daughter is really active and she doesn't like staying at home or like relaxing.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'exciting' to be grammatically correct.