Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent.

Ví dụ: I went to Schoenherben, the world's largest mango forest, for my last holiday in November. It was very beautiful, and I spent about four days there. Most of my university friends and teachers were not there during that time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like holidays because they provide a chance to relax and refresh the mind after continuous work. I believe people should enjoy holidays without doing any work to fully recharge.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details with correct grammar. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: My favorite public holiday is Eid al-Fitr because it is one of the biggest holidays in Bangladesh. During this time, people return to their hometowns to meet family and celebrate together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: On holidays, I usually relax by eating and traveling to different scenic places with my friends. We often use bikes to explore nearby areas, and for longer distances, we use other transportation.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like spending my days at home because I feel unproductive. I prefer to do various productive activities outside to keep myself busy and feel free.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with supporting details.

Ví dụ: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax alone without any problems. This helps me recharge and enjoy my free time peacefully.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: When I was younger, I preferred exciting holidays, but now that I am older, I prefer peaceful holidays. I believe peace is important for the mind and helps me relax better.

× For the last holiday, I went to the Schoenherben that's the world's largest mango forest.

✓ For the last holiday, I went to Schoenherben, which is the world's largest mango forest.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'that's' as a contraction for 'that is' in a past context. Using 'which is' correctly introduces the appositive clause describing Schoenherben. Also, 'the Schoenherben' is incorrect because proper nouns like place names usually do not take 'the'.

× And it was the time about, uh, November and most all of my friends of my universities in my department weren't there, including my teachers and, uh, whether it was very beautiful and we have spent there about four days.

✓ It was around November, and most of my friends from my university department weren't there, including my teachers. The weather was very beautiful, and we spent about four days there.

The phrase 'the time about, uh, November' is awkward; 'around November' is correct. 'Most all of my friends of my universities' is incorrect; it should be 'most of my friends from my university department.' 'Whether it was very beautiful' is a misuse of 'whether'; it should be 'the weather was very beautiful.' Also, 'we have spent there' should be past simple 'we spent there' to match the past context.

× Yes, I like holidays because every day when the people work like continues to working, they should take sometimes for the relaxation for their mind and also their brain so they take refreshment.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because every day when people work continuously, they should sometimes take time to relax their mind and brain to refresh themselves.

The phrase 'like continues to working' is incorrect; it should be 'work continuously.' 'Take sometimes for the relaxation for their mind' is awkward; better is 'sometimes take time to relax their mind.' 'Take refreshment' is not idiomatic; 'refresh themselves' is better.

× And for this I like the holidays and holidays. The I think the holidays the people shouldn't do any case of work they should enjoy.

✓ For this reason, I like holidays. I think during holidays, people shouldn't do any kind of work; they should enjoy themselves.

The sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'And for this I like the holidays and holidays' is redundant. 'The I think the holidays the people shouldn't do any case of work' is ungrammatical and unclear. Correct pronoun use and clearer phrasing improve the sentence.

× Best public holiday I like the best that is the it'll fitter and it'll also because it's one of the largest holidays at Bangladesh and all the people from Bangladesh come go there own house and meet their family and enjoy this holiday.

✓ The best public holiday I like is Eid al-Fitr because it's one of the biggest holidays in Bangladesh. All the people from Bangladesh go to their own homes to meet their families and enjoy this holiday.

'It'll fitter and it'll also' is incorrect; the holiday is 'Eid al-Fitr.' 'At Bangladesh' should be 'in Bangladesh.' 'Come go there own house' is incorrect; it should be 'go to their own homes.' Pronouns and verb forms are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× On holidays I don't do anything, nothing but eating and moving from one place to another.

✓ On holidays, I don't do anything except eat and move from one place to another.

'Nothing but eating and moving' is awkward; 'except eat and move' is more natural. Also, a comma after 'On holidays' improves readability.

× But main thing is I went with my friends with various kinds of scenic view or special places.

✓ But the main thing is I go with my friends to various scenic places or special locations.

'I went' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'I go' is better. 'With various kinds of scenic view' is incorrect; it should be 'to various scenic places.' Prepositions are corrected accordingly.

× Especially we use the bike to move from one place to another, but it's more far more farther distance we use the.

✓ Especially, we use bikes to move from one place to another, but for longer distances, we use other transportation.

'More far more farther distance' is redundant and incorrect; 'longer distances' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; completing it improves clarity. 'Use the bike' should be plural 'use bikes' for general statement.

× No, at home I don't like this at all.

✓ No, I don't like being at home at all.

'I don't like this at all' is vague; specifying 'being at home' clarifies the meaning.

× I'd like to spend my days on various kinds of work that does our productive works.

✓ I'd like to spend my days doing various kinds of productive work.

'Spend my days on various kinds of work that does our productive works' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Doing various kinds of productive work' is correct and clearer.

× Yes, basically because at home I become totally worthless and I don't have any kinds of work.

✓ Yes, basically because at home I feel totally useless and I don't have any kind of work.

'Become totally worthless' is harsh and awkward; 'feel totally useless' is more natural. 'Any kinds of work' should be 'any kind of work'.

× So without work I can't show, I can't be free.

✓ So without work, I can't relax or feel free.

'I can't show' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'I can't be free' is vague; 'relax or feel free' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I prefer a leisurely holiday because leisurely holiday I'm totally alone.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because during a leisurely holiday, I'm totally alone.

The sentence lacks prepositions and articles. Adding 'during a' clarifies the meaning.

× I don't have any kinds of problems.

✓ I don't have any kind of problems.

'Any kinds of problems' is incorrect; 'any kind of problems' is the correct singular form.

× That's why I prefer the lesbian computer.

✓ That's why I prefer a leisurely holiday.

'Lesbian computer' is a mispronunciation or error; the intended phrase is 'leisurely holiday.' Correcting this clarifies the meaning.

× I've been very peaceful holiday at when I was a kid or as an adolescent.

✓ I had very peaceful holidays when I was a kid or an adolescent.

'I've been very peaceful holiday at when I was a kid' is ungrammatical. Past simple 'I had' is appropriate. 'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays.' 'At when' is incorrect; 'when' alone suffices.

× I prefer an exciting holiday.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× And now I have grown up and I am more than 24 and I like peace and I have excitement but but peace is much more mandatory for the brain and also the human mind and I prefer the peace.

✓ Now I have grown up and I am over 24. I like peace and excitement, but peace is much more important for the brain and the human mind, so I prefer peace.

'I am more than 24' should be 'I am over 24.' 'I have excitement' is awkward; 'I like excitement' is better. 'Much more mandatory' is incorrect; 'much more important' is appropriate. 'I prefer the peace' should be 'I prefer peace.'