Holidays— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more clear and grammatically correct. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and avoid repetition. Also, provide more specific details about the place and your experience to make your answer more engaging.

Ví dụ: Last weekend, my friend and I went to Koshmal, a beautiful waterfall located in Vasta. The area is surrounded by lush greenery, and many people enjoy the natural environment there. It was an amazing experience for both of us.

Gợi ý: Improve your grammar and sentence structure. Use plural forms correctly and make your sentences more natural. Also, explain why spending time with family and friends is important to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like holidays very much because they give me quality time to spend with my family and friends. This helps me relax and strengthen my relationships.

Gợi ý: Focus on correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about the traditions and why you enjoy them.

Ví dụ: Diwali is my favorite public holiday because it brings my family together. We decorate our home with diyas, and my mother prepares special sweet dishes that I really enjoy.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid repetition and explain your activities more clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: It depends on the holiday. For traditional holidays, my family and I visit religious places to offer prayers. Sometimes, we also spend quality time together enjoying each other's company.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and be more specific about what you do at home or outside. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. If my friends are around, I like to go out with them. Otherwise, I spend time at home with my family, discussing problems and finding solutions.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Make your answer more concise and clear. Explain why you prefer each type of holiday depending on your situation.

Ví dụ: As I mentioned before, it depends on my company. If my friends are with me, I enjoy going out to restaurants or shopping. But if I have a busy lifestyle, I prefer to relax at home and cook, which helps me unwind.

Gợi ý: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas. Explain clearly why you like both types of holidays.

Ví dụ: I prefer both types of holidays. Exciting holidays give me emotional joy and help me connect with my family. However, when I have a busy work schedule, I prefer peaceful holidays at home to relax.

× Last weekend me and my friend went for a Koshmal trip.

✓ Last weekend my friend and I went for a Koshmal trip.

The phrase 'me and my friend' is incorrect because 'me' is an object pronoun and should not be used as the subject. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, the order should be 'my friend and I' as a polite convention.

× It is located in a in the Vasta which is a wonderful waterfall in which the people are enjoying the greenery environment around the waterfall.

✓ It is located in Vasta, which is a wonderful waterfall where people enjoy the green environment around it.

The phrase 'in a in the Vasta' is incorrect and redundant. Also, 'in which the people are enjoying the greenery environment' is awkward; 'where people enjoy the green environment' is more natural. 'Greenery environment' is not a common collocation; 'green environment' is better.

× It it is amazing experience for me or my friend.

✓ It is an amazing experience for my friend and me.

The sentence has a repeated 'It it' and uses 'or' incorrectly. The correct phrase is 'my friend and me' as the object of the preposition. Also, 'an amazing experience' requires the article 'an' before a vowel sound.

× Yes, of course I like holiday because it gave me a quality of time which are used for the spending with my family and friends.

✓ Yes, of course I like holidays because they give me quality time which I spend with my family and friends.

The word 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the general statement. 'It gave me' should be 'they give me' to agree with plural 'holidays'. 'Which are used for the spending' is incorrect; it should be 'which I spend'.

× Diwali is my favorite public holiday because most of the family members stay connected with them and enjoy the festival.

✓ Diwali is my favorite public holiday because most family members stay connected and enjoy the festival.

The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'family members' is the subject. Also, 'most of the family members' can be simplified to 'most family members'.

× My home is decorated with the Dias and my mother's pay make some special sweet dishes which I love it.

✓ My home is decorated with diyas and my mother makes some special sweet dishes which I love.

'Dias' should be 'diyas' (correct spelling). 'My mother's pay make' is incorrect; it should be 'my mother makes' to agree with singular subject. The pronoun 'it' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.

× It depends on the holiday, if it is a traditional holiday so me and my family go to the religious place and just bless bless of my God or sometime enjoy with my family.

✓ It depends on the holiday. If it is a traditional holiday, my family and I go to a religious place to seek blessings from God or sometimes enjoy time with my family.

The sentence is a run-on and awkward. 'Me and my family' should be 'my family and I'. 'Bless bless of my God' is incorrect; it should be 'seek blessings from God'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also, 'enjoy with my family' is incomplete; 'enjoy time with my family' is better.

× It depend on my mood if my my friend are in my company so I just go out with them or sometime at in my home I spend time with my family and talk with my all other problem or some solution.

✓ It depends on my mood. If my friends are with me, I go out with them, or sometimes at home I spend time with my family and talk about my problems or find some solutions.

'It depend' should be 'It depends' to agree with singular subject. 'My my friend are' is incorrect; should be 'my friends are'. 'At in my home' is incorrect; 'at home' is correct. 'Talk with my all other problem' is incorrect; 'talk about my problems' is correct.

× I previously mentioned it depend on my company if my friend are all around me so I just go out with them either in a restaurant or sometime in a shopping.

✓ I previously mentioned it depends on my company. If my friends are all around me, I just go out with them either to a restaurant or sometimes shopping.

'It depend' should be 'it depends'. 'My friend are' should be 'my friends are' to agree in number. 'Sometime in a shopping' is incorrect; 'sometimes shopping' is correct.

× But if I have a busy lifestyle lifestyle I just relax at home and prepare some dishes which relax me.

✓ But if I have a busy lifestyle, I just relax at home and prepare some dishes that relax me.

Repeated word 'lifestyle lifestyle' is a typo. 'Which relax me' is acceptable but 'that relax me' is more common for defining clauses.

× I I prefer both because exciting holiday give me a excitation or emotional value connected with my family so I just prefer it.

✓ I prefer both because an exciting holiday gives me excitement and emotional value connected with my family, so I just prefer it.

Repeated 'I I' is a typo. 'Exciting holiday give' should be 'an exciting holiday gives' to agree in number and article. 'A excitation' is incorrect; 'excitement' is the correct noun form.

× But if I have a busy lifestyle or a busy work schedule so I just relax at my home and I prefer the peaceful holiday.

✓ But if I have a busy lifestyle or a busy work schedule, I just relax at home and prefer a peaceful holiday.

'At my home' is better as 'at home'. 'I prefer the peaceful holiday' should be 'I prefer a peaceful holiday' because it is a general preference, not a specific holiday.