Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you keep plants at home?
Thí sinh
Yes, I keep many plants in my home, including some, uh, green plants and, uh, some vegetables. My especially my father grows some uh, vegetables on the top floor of our house.
Giám khảo
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, I didn't have the habit to grow a plant, but my father always has such a habit. He takes care of these plants very carefully and they grows very well.
Giám khảo
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Thí sinh
Before I started to grow plants, I didn't have too much knowledge about how to grow them, but once I started to take care of them, I learned a lot of things from the social media.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Thí sinh
Yes, we regard regard plants as a fortune gift. For example, if one of my colleagues moved his home, we purchased a plant to him.
Do you keep plants at home?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有一些语气词(如“uh”)影响了流畅度,建议减少使用。回答时应更自然简洁,避免重复和语法错误,例如“especially”用法不当。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I keep many plants at home, including green plants and vegetables. Especially, my father grows vegetables on the top floor of our house.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态和单复数有错误,如“has”应为“had”,“grows”应为“grow”。建议直接回答问题并用连接词丰富内容,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I didn't grow plants myself, but my father always did. He took care of them carefully, so they grew very well.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但“the social media”用法不准确,应为“social media”。建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,并具体说明学到了什么。
Ví dụ: Before I started growing plants, I didn't know much about it. However, after I began taking care of them, I learned a lot from social media, such as watering and sunlight requirements.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词“regard regard”,且表达不够自然。建议用更地道的表达方式,如“consider plants as lucky gifts”,并注意介词使用,如“bought a plant for him”。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese people often consider plants as lucky gifts. For example, when a colleague moves to a new home, we usually buy a plant for him.
× Yes, I keep many plants in my home, including some, uh, green plants and, uh, some vegetables.
✓ Yes, I keep many plants in my home, including some green plants and some vegetables.
The original sentence has unnecessary commas around 'uh' which interrupt the flow. Removing them improves clarity. However, this is more about punctuation than singular/plural. No singular/plural error here, so no correction needed for that.
× My especially my father grows some uh, vegetables on the top floor of our house.
✓ Especially my father grows some vegetables on the top floor of our house.
The phrase 'My especially my father' is incorrect. 'Especially my father' is the correct form. Also, 'some uh,' has an unnecessary filler and comma. Removing 'my' and 'uh,' corrects the sentence. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue, not singular/plural.
× He takes care of these plants very carefully and they grows very well.
✓ He takes care of these plants very carefully and they grow very well.
The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'grow' not 'grows'. This is a subject-verb agreement error involving third person plural form.
× When I was young, I didn't have the habit to grow a plant, but my father always has such a habit.
✓ When I was young, I didn't have the habit of growing plants, but my father always had such a habit.
The phrase 'habit to grow a plant' is incorrect; it should be 'habit of growing plants'. Also, since the time frame is past, 'has' should be 'had'. This corrects the past tense and verb form usage.
× For example, if one of my colleagues moved his home, we purchased a plant to him.
✓ For example, if one of my colleagues moved to a new home, we purchased a plant for him.
The phrase 'moved his home' is incorrect; it should be 'moved to a new home'. Also, 'purchased a plant to him' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for him'. This fixes preposition usage errors.