Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you keep plants at home?
Thí sinh
Uh, no, I don't count at home because I'm a little allergic to plants. If I keep plants, uh, I will have a special feed kind of disease, but I really love plants.
Giám khảo
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Thí sinh
Uh, maybe I didn't grow any plants when I was young because I'm very allergic to it and the doctor did not allow this to happen. So I did not keep lungs when I was young.
Giám khảo
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Thí sinh
Maybe I have no idea about growing a plant because I'm really allergic to it and maybe I should less interest in growing a plant. Wow my parents have we know about growing a plant.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Thí sinh
Maybe I I don't think so. Sent in prunes as gifts to people seems a little bit weird in the culture of Chinese. Chinese people usually send other things like fresh fruits to people as the gifts instead of purely safety. Gift clowns as a gift.
Do you keep plants at home?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“count at home”应为“keep plants at home”,且表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免重复和模糊表达。
Ví dụ: No, I don't keep plants at home because I'm allergic to them. However, I really like plants and enjoy seeing them in other places.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,如“keep lungs”应为“keep plants”,且表达不够连贯。建议直接回答问题并用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I didn't grow any plants when I was young because I was allergic to them, and my doctor advised me not to. Therefore, I avoided keeping plants at home.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱,表达不清晰,缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't know much about growing plants because of my allergy. However, my parents know a lot about it and often take care of their garden.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误,如“Sent in prunes”应为“Sending plants”,且表达不连贯。建议使用正确的词汇和句式,清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I don't think Chinese people usually send plants as gifts because it might be considered unusual. Instead, they often give fresh fruits or other traditional presents.
× If I keep plants, uh, I will have a special feed kind of disease, but I really love plants.
✓ If I keep plants, uh, I will have a special kind of allergic disease, but I really love plants.
这里'special feed kind of disease'中的'feed'是错误的,应该是'allergic',表示过敏的疾病。'kind of'后面接单数名词。
× So I did not keep lungs when I was young.
✓ So I did not keep plants when I was young.
这里'lungs'是错误的,应该是'plants',因为上下文讲的是植物。
× Maybe I have no idea about growing a plant because I'm really allergic to it and maybe I should less interest in growing a plant.
✓ Maybe I have no idea about growing plants because I'm really allergic to them and maybe I have less interest in growing plants.
'it'指代复数'plants'不正确,应该用'them'。'should less interest'结构错误,应该用'have less interest'。
× Wow my parents have we know about growing a plant.
✓ Wow, my parents know about growing plants.
句子结构混乱,'have we know'错误,应简化为'my parents know'。
× Sent in prunes as gifts to people seems a little bit weird in the culture of Chinese.
✓ Sending plants as gifts to people seems a little bit weird in Chinese culture.
'Sent in prunes'错误,应为'Sending plants'。'Chinese culture'前不加'the'。
× Chinese people usually send other things like fresh fruits to people as the gifts instead of purely safety.
✓ Chinese people usually send other things like fresh fruits to people as gifts instead of plants.
'the gifts'应为' gifts','purely safety'错误,应为'plants'。
× Gift clowns as a gift.
✓ Giving plants as a gift.
'Gift clowns'错误,应为'Giving plants'。