PlantsPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Actually, I can say that, yeah, of course. Uh, because my mom adores, uh, keeping plants at our home and that's why we have a lot of flowers. Umm, it's this and I can say that it's cool for our health.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

I remember that when I was a child, my grandparents, umm, keep kept, uh, a lot of roses in their garden and that's why my grandma gave me a rose and I, I grow these plants.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

Without a doubt I can say yes because I have one hobby at school. It's grow a plan in laboratory and there are our teacher teach our how we can care about take care about our plans and.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

So I I didn't know well, but I have one Chinese friend and he gave me. Bear with flowers in my birthday and I can say yeah, Chinese people send plants as a birthday.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh" и "umm". Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретные детали, используя связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do keep plants at home because my mother loves gardening. As a result, we have many flowers, which I believe contribute positively to our health.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные времена и избегать повторов. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте детали с помощью связующих слов.

Ví dụ: When I was young, my grandparents had many roses in their garden. Because of that, my grandmother gave me a rose plant, which I took care of and grew successfully.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные конструкции и более четко выражать мысли. Используйте связующие слова для плавности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do know about growing plants because I have a hobby at school where we grow plants in the laboratory. Our teacher teaches us how to take care of them properly.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо, избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также важно уточнить информацию и привести пример.

Ví dụ: I am not sure, but I have a Chinese friend who gave me a bouquet of flowers for my birthday. So, I believe that Chinese people do send plants or flowers as gifts on special occasions.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the past participle form

× my grandparents, umm, keep kept, uh, a lot of roses in their garden

my grandparents, umm, kept a lot of roses in their garden

The verb 'keep' should be in the past tense 'kept' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a child'. The original sentence incorrectly uses both present and past forms together, which is grammatically incorrect.

Past tense issue

× I, I grow these plants

I grew these plants

Since the context is about the past ('when I was a child'), the verb should be in the past tense 'grew' instead of the present tense 'grow'.

Present tense issue

× It's grow a plan in laboratory

I grow a plant in the laboratory

The sentence lacks a proper subject and uses 'It's' incorrectly. The correct form is 'I grow a plant in the laboratory' to express a habitual action in the present.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× our teacher teach our how we can care about take care about our plans and

our teacher teaches us how we can take care of our plants

The prepositions 'about' are incorrectly used. The correct phrase is 'take care of' something. Also, 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher', and 'our' should be 'us' as the object pronoun.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× he gave me. Bear with flowers in my birthday

he gave me a bear with flowers on my birthday

The article 'a' is missing before 'bear'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to specific days like 'my birthday'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Chinese people send plants as a birthday

Chinese people send plants as birthday gifts

The phrase 'as a birthday' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'as birthday gifts' to correctly express the idea of giving plants as gifts for birthdays.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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