PlantsPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a couple of plants at home and it's not too fancy but very easy to grow. It doesn't take effort and it really brighten my room. When I was studying I just watching them and it can make me very calm and relaxed.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

I remember I grow beans in primary school for a science project and we put the beans in cotton and water them every day. We really want to see this brought and for me it is very exciting to see them every morning. I want to see they will grow taller.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

Not really just the basics like plants need water, sunshine and air. I don't know much about it but my grandma loves gardening and sometimes I just watch her doing that.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

Yes. For example, Chinese people send lucky bamboo as a gift for someone who a move into new house or opening a new business. A lucky bamboo is a symbol of good fortune or steady, steady growth and it just not as a gift. It's a meaningful gift.

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Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和时态使用不够准确,且句子结构较为简单,建议注意动词时态一致性和句子完整性,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep a few easy-to-care-for plants at home. They brighten up my room and help me feel calm and relaxed, especially when I study.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议加强时态和主谓一致的使用,并且用更具体的细节丰富答案。

Ví dụ: When I was in primary school, I grew beans for a science project. We placed the beans on cotton and watered them daily. It was exciting to watch them grow taller every morning.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简短,缺少连贯的连接词和更丰富的细节,建议使用连接词使表达更流畅,并补充更多相关信息。

Ví dụ: I only know the basics, such as plants need water, sunshine, and air. However, my grandma loves gardening, and I often watch her, which helps me learn more about it.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复,建议注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese people often give lucky bamboo as a gift when someone moves into a new house or starts a business. It symbolizes good fortune and steady growth, making it a meaningful present.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× When I was studying I just watching them and it can make me very calm and relaxed.

When I was studying I just watched them and it could make me very calm and relaxed.

这里的动词时态错误,句子描述过去的动作,应该用过去式"watched",而且后半句的情态动词也应与过去时态一致,使用"could"。

Past tense issue

× I remember I grow beans in primary school for a science project and we put the beans in cotton and water them every day.

I remember I grew beans in primary school for a science project and we put the beans in cotton and watered them every day.

描述过去的事情,动词"grow"和"water"应使用过去式"grew"和"watered"。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× We really want to see this brought and for me it is very exciting to see them every morning.

We really wanted to see them sprout and for me it was very exciting to see them every morning.

"this brought"用词错误,应为"them sprout"表示豆芽发芽;同时时态应与上下文一致,使用过去时。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I want to see they will grow taller.

I wanted to see them grow taller.

"they"应改为宾格"them",且时态应为过去时,保持与上下文一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Chinese people send lucky bamboo as a gift for someone who a move into new house or opening a new business.

Chinese people send lucky bamboo as a gift for someone who moves into a new house or opens a new business.

关系从句中缺少动词"moves"和"opens",且"a move"应为动词形式"moves",同时"new house"前应加不定冠词"a"。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× A lucky bamboo is a symbol of good fortune or steady, steady growth and it just not as a gift.

Lucky bamboo is a symbol of good fortune or steady, steady growth and it is not just a gift.

"A lucky bamboo"应去掉冠词,表示泛指;"it just not as a gift"缺少动词,应为"it is not just a gift"。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ExcitingThrilling; Arousing
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LuckyFortunate; Providential
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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