Plants— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I do my' and 'plans' instead of 'plants'. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting these mistakes and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep some plants at home, such as roses and jasmine. I plant them every week and take care of them whenever I have free time.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains some grammar mistakes like 'plain' instead of 'plant' and inconsistent tenses. Try to use past tense consistently and add linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I tried to plant flowers like roses and lilies. Unfortunately, they didn't grow well because I couldn't take care of them properly. However, my teacher taught me how to help plants grow healthier.

Gợi ý: Your answer is short and lacks coherence. Avoid starting sentences with 'Because' and try to combine ideas using linking words. Also, correct 'plane' to 'plants'.

Ví dụ: No, I don't know much about growing plants now, but I hope to learn more in the future. I want to study with my friend because she knows a lot about plants.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct plural forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I don't think Chinese people usually send plants as gifts. For example, my Chinese friends have never given me plants; they usually give money instead.

× Yes, I do my in my house there are some plans such as roses and also Jasmine because I always plan it every week and I always take care of it if I have a leisure time.

✓ Yes, I do. In my house, there are some plants such as roses and also jasmine because I always plant them every week and I always take care of them if I have leisure time.

The word 'plans' should be 'plants' to refer to living vegetation. 'Plan' is a verb or noun unrelated to plants. Also, 'plant' is the correct verb instead of 'plan'. 'Jasmine' should not be capitalized unless it starts a sentence. 'Leisure time' does not need 'a'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'plants'. These corrections fix singular/plural agreement and word choice.

× Yes, I do my in my house there are some plans such as roses and also Jasmine because I always plan it every week and I always take care of it if I have a leisure time.

✓ Yes, I do. In my house, there are some plants such as roses and also jasmine because I always plant them every week and I always take care of them if I have leisure time.

The verb 'plan' is incorrectly used instead of 'plant'. The correct verb is 'plant' and it should be in the base form here. Also, 'plan it' should be 'plant them' to match the plural noun 'plants'.

× I remember the time I tried to plain some flowers such as rose and also Lily but sadly it didn't work because I cannot take care of it but my teacher taught me how to make it grow healthier.

✓ I remember the time I tried to plant some flowers such as roses and also lilies but sadly it didn't work because I could not take care of them, but my teacher taught me how to make them grow healthier.

The verb 'plain' is incorrect; it should be 'plant'. 'Rose' and 'Lily' should be plural 'roses' and 'lilies' to match the context. 'Cannot' should be in past tense 'could not' to match 'tried'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural flowers. These changes correct past tense and singular/plural issues.

× No, I don't, but hopefully in the future I can learn it better than today and I want to learn it with my friends. Because she knows everything about plane.

✓ No, I don't, but hopefully in the future I can learn it better than today and I want to learn it with my friends because they know everything about plants.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrect when referring to 'friends' which is plural; it should be 'they'. Also, 'plane' is a misspelling of 'plant'. The sentence starting with 'Because' should be connected to the previous sentence for proper structure.

× I don't think so because at the time my friends who is a Chinese people, they don't give me some plans as gift, they just give me some monies as a gift.

✓ I don't think so because my friends who are Chinese people don't give me plants as gifts; they just give me money as a gift.

'Friends' is plural, so 'who is' should be 'who are'. 'Chinese people' is plural, so no article 'a' is needed. 'Plans' should be 'plants'. 'Monies' is rarely used; 'money' is the correct uncountable noun. 'As gift' should be 'as gifts' to match plural 'plants'. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.