Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you keep plants at home?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I have a couple of green plants in my living room, nothing too fancy, just a few to decorate the space. They really help me relax and focus on my studies.
Giám khảo
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a kid I remember growing beans in primary school for a science project. We planted small Peps, water Zen every day and watching things slowly sprout. It's worth such as an interesting experience for me.
Giám khảo
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, I know some busy technology such as fact the plants need sufficient sunlight, water and super soil. I don't know that much but my mother loves gardening so sometimes I just watching her doing it.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Thí sinh
Yes, people in China do give plans but it's not that coming usually friends, it's a family giving nightly bamboo. And like when someone into the new home or open a business, I think it's a really nice idea especially if the person like plants.
Do you keep plants at home?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构较简单,缺少连接词使得表达略显断裂。建议使用更多连接词和丰富细节,使回答更连贯且具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I keep a couple of green plants in my living room. They are not too fancy, but they help decorate the space beautifully. Moreover, having these plants around really helps me relax and concentrate better on my studies.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和用词错误,表达不够清晰。建议注意时态一致,使用正确词汇,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I grew beans in primary school as part of a science project. We planted small seeds, watered them every day, and watched them slowly sprout. It was a very interesting experience for me.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和不恰当的词汇使用,表达不够自然。建议学习相关词汇和句型,注意语法,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I know that plants need sufficient sunlight, water, and good soil to grow well. Although I don't know much, I often watch my mother gardening, which helps me learn more about plant care.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且缺少逻辑连接。建议加强语法学习,使用连接词,明确表达观点并提供具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese people do give plants as gifts, but it is more common among family members. For example, they often give lucky bamboo when someone moves into a new home or starts a business. I think this is a thoughtful gift, especially if the person likes plants.
× We planted small Peps, water Zen every day and watching things slowly sprout.
✓ We planted small peas, watered them every day and watched things slowly sprout.
句中描述过去发生的动作,动词应使用过去式。'water'和'watching'应改为过去式'watered'和'watched',以保持时态一致。
× It's worth such as an interesting experience for me.
✓ It was such an interesting experience for me.
表达“这是一次有趣的经历”时,'such as'用法错误,应使用'such an'来修饰名词短语。
× I know some busy technology such as fact the plants need sufficient sunlight, water and super soil.
✓ I know some basic facts such as the plants need sufficient sunlight, water and good soil.
原句中'busy technology'和'fact'用法不当,应为'basic facts',且'super soil'不合适,改为'good soil'更自然。
× I don't know that much but my mother loves gardening so sometimes I just watching her doing it.
✓ I don't know that much but my mother loves gardening so sometimes I just watch her doing it.
'just watching'应改为动词原形'just watch',因为前面有助动词'do',动词应用原形。
× Yes, people in China do give plans but it's not that coming usually friends, it's a family giving nightly bamboo.
✓ Yes, people in China do give plants but it's not that common, usually friends, it's family giving lucky bamboo.
'plans'应为'plants','coming'应为'common','nightly bamboo'应为'lucky bamboo',且句子结构混乱,需调整。
× And like when someone into the new home or open a business, I think it's a really nice idea especially if the person like plants.
✓ And like when someone moves into a new home or opens a business, I think it's a really nice idea especially if the person likes plants.
缺少动词,'someone into'应为'someone moves into','open a business'应为'opens a business','person like'应为'person likes',保持主谓一致。