Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you keep plants at home?
Thí sinh
Yes yeah, I keep plants in my home like uh, flowers such as lilies and roses. I do love guaranteeing, uh, this plants. I think them looks like a companion with me.
Giám khảo
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Thí sinh
I had planned, uh, Lily's and roses because they looked very beautiful and, uh, at the same time they had, uh, well, a fragrant smell. I love them.
Giám khảo
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I know The basicology is about make. Make is about making sure they have enough water. So sometimes I will take them to my bathroom to water them.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely all in China, people usually accept the plans as a gift in special festivals, especially Spring Festival. And sometimes like uh, Teachers Day, uh, Chinese students will send plans to their teachers.
Do you keep plants at home?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有一些语法错误和用词不当,比如“guaranteeing”应为“gardening”,以及“this plants”应为“these plants”。建议你在回答时注意语法和词汇的准确性,同时避免使用填充词如“uh”。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述你对植物的喜爱。
Ví dụ: Yes, I keep some plants at home, such as lilies and roses. I really enjoy gardening because these plants feel like my companions.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“had planned”应为“planted”,“Lily's”应为“lilies”。建议你直接回答问题,使用正确的时态和复数形式,并且减少填充词,使表达更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I planted lilies and roses because they looked beautiful and smelled very fragrant. I loved taking care of them.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有很多语法和表达错误,比如“basicology”应为“basics”,“make”用法不当。建议你学习并使用正确的词汇和句型,清晰地表达你对植物养护的了解,同时避免重复和不连贯的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I know the basics of growing plants. For example, I make sure they get enough water, so sometimes I take them to the bathroom to water them properly.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误,如“plans”应为“plants”,并且句子结构不够自然。建议你使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构,避免重复和填充词,使表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, in China, people often give plants as gifts during special occasions, especially the Spring Festival. For example, students sometimes give plants to their teachers on Teachers' Day.
× I do love guaranteeing, uh, this plants.
✓ I do love gardening, uh, these plants.
The word 'plants' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'these' instead of 'this'. Also, 'guaranteeing' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'gardening'. The error is a mix of plural agreement and incorrect word choice.
× I think them looks like a companion with me.
✓ I think they look like companions to me.
The pronoun 'them' is incorrect as the subject; it should be 'they'. Also, 'looks' should be 'look' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. 'Like a companion with me' is awkward; 'like companions to me' is more natural.
× I had planned, uh, Lily's and roses because they looked very beautiful and, uh, at the same time they had, uh, well, a fragrant smell.
✓ I had planted, uh, lilies and roses because they looked very beautiful and, uh, at the same time they had, uh, well, a fragrant smell.
The word 'Lily's' is incorrect; it should be the plural noun 'lilies'. Also, 'had planned' is incorrect in this context; the correct past tense verb is 'had planted'.
× I had planned, uh, Lily's and roses because they looked very beautiful and, uh, at the same time they had, uh, well, a fragrant smell.
✓ I had planted, uh, lilies and roses because they looked very beautiful and, uh, at the same time they had, uh, well, a fragrant smell.
The verb 'had planned' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb for growing plants is 'had planted'.
× Yeah, I know The basicology is about make.
✓ Yeah, I know the basics are about making.
'The basicology' is not a correct term; 'the basics' is appropriate. Also, 'is about make' is incorrect; it should be 'are about making' to use the gerund form after 'about' and agree in number.
× Make is about making sure they have enough water.
✓ It is about making sure they have enough water.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Replacing 'Make' with 'It' clarifies the subject. The gerund 'making' is correctly used after 'about'.
× So sometimes I will take them to my bathroom to water them.
✓ So sometimes I will take them to my bathroom to water them.
This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.
× Yes, definitely all in China, people usually accept the plans as a gift in special festivals, especially Spring Festival.
✓ Yes, definitely in China, people usually accept plants as gifts in special festivals, especially the Spring Festival.
'Plans' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'plants'. Also, 'a gift' should be plural 'gifts' to agree with 'plants'. 'All in China' is awkward; 'in China' is sufficient. 'The Spring Festival' requires the definite article.
× And sometimes like uh, Teachers Day, uh, Chinese students will send plans to their teachers.
✓ And sometimes, like on Teachers' Day, Chinese students will send plants to their teachers.
The preposition 'on' is needed before 'Teachers' Day'. Also, 'plans' should be 'plants'. The possessive form 'Teachers' Day' requires an apostrophe.