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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have some snowplows on my balcony, although I wouldn't say I have a plant thumb, but you know, I think these plants can really brighten my space so I just buy some low maintenance plus.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

While I was in primary school my mother bought me a small floor to take care of so I had to water it regularly and make sure it got enough sunlight. But it just swelled for a few weeks so I think I am not good at.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

Not really, I don't have much experience about caring for a plant. I just rely on other advice about take how take care of a plant. I prefer buying a plant from a store instead of.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so. Chinese people may prefer practical gifts. Someone send food or household items as gifts because people don't have time and knowledge to take care of a plant and you know.

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Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误(如'snowplows'应为植物名称),表达不够自然,且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用正确的植物名称,简洁明了地表达观点,避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep some succulents on my balcony because they are easy to care for and add a touch of greenery to my home.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误('small floor'应为植物名称),句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,使用正确词汇,并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I grew a small cactus that my mother gave me. I watered it regularly and placed it near the window to get enough sunlight.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达自己的经验和偏好。

Ví dụ: I don't have much experience in growing plants, so I usually follow advice from experts and prefer buying plants that are easy to maintain.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显口语化且不够正式。建议使用更正式的表达,避免口语化词汇,补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: Generally, Chinese people prefer giving practical gifts such as food or household items, as many may not have the time or knowledge to care for plants.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I have some snowplows on my balcony, although I wouldn't say I have a plant thumb, but you know, I think these plants can really brighten my space so I just buy some low maintenance plus.

Yes, I have some snowplants on my balcony, although I wouldn't say I have a plant thumb, but you know, I think these plants can really brighten my space so I just buy some low maintenance plants.

原句中'snowplows'应为'snowplants',因为'snowplow'是除雪车,与植物无关,且后文提到'plants',应保持一致。最后的'plus'应为'plants',表示多肉植物。此处是名词的单复数和词汇错误,需改正。

Past tense issue

× While I was in primary school my mother bought me a small floor to take care of so I had to water it regularly and make sure it got enough sunlight.

While I was in primary school, my mother bought me a small flower to take care of, so I had to water it regularly and make sure it got enough sunlight.

原句中'small floor'应为'small flower','floor'是地板,语义错误。此处属于词汇错误,虽然不完全是时态问题,但因题目要求只改符合列表的错误,故不改词汇。此句时态正确,无需改动。

Past tense issue

× But it just swelled for a few weeks so I think I am not good at.

But it just wilted after a few weeks, so I think I was not good at it.

原句中'swelled'用词错误,应为'wilted'表示植物枯萎。'I think I am not good at'缺少宾语,且时态应与前文保持一致,改为'was not good at it'。此处涉及过去时态和句子结构错误。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Not really, I don't have much experience about caring for a plant.

Not really, I don't have much experience in caring for a plant.

'experience about'用法错误,正确搭配是'experience in',表示在某方面有经验。介词使用错误,需改正。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I just rely on other advice about take how take care of a plant.

I just rely on other advice about how to take care of a plant.

原句中'about take how take care'语序和用词错误,正确表达应为'about how to take care'。此处涉及介词和不定式用法错误。

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer buying a plant from a store instead of.

I prefer buying a plant from a store instead of growing one myself.

原句'instead of'后缺少比较对象,导致句子不完整。需补充完整句子,使表达清晰。

Singular and plural issue

× Someone send food or household items as gifts because people don't have time and knowledge to take care of a plant and you know.

Some people send food or household items as gifts because people don't have time and knowledge to take care of plants, you know.

'Someone send'主谓不一致,应为'Some people send'。'a plant'改为'plants'更符合语境。此处涉及单复数和主谓一致问题。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LowShort; Cheap; Scarce; Inferior; Humble
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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