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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Uh, no actually, because I'm still a student now and most of the time I live in the dorm so I don't have enough time and space for plant. But in the future when I have my job and, uh, when I have my own space, I think I, uh, uh, keep some plants in my home to make the space more lively.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

Well, when I was a child, I lived in a rural village with my grandma and I just help her to grow some vegetables such like tomatoes, uh, carrots and other vegetables. Umm, it could help us to save money and ensure fresh food and uh, I just help her to water them.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

Yes, I know a bit about it. For example, I know that you shouldn't quote much for the because it could actually damage its roots and deploying the leaves. So uh, it's actually about putting the right amount rather than adding more and more.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

Well, I think it happens quite a lot. For example, when someone gets a new place and his friend will send him a potted plant or flowers at house warming gifts. Uh, that's because, uh, plants cannot prevent good luck or a fresh start. So it's meaningful for Chinese.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多的语气词“uh”,影响流畅性。建议减少重复和犹豫词汇,回答更简洁自然。同时,注意单复数形式,如“space for plant”应为“space for plants”。

Ví dụ: No, I don't keep plants at home currently because I live in a dormitory with limited space. However, once I start working and have my own place, I plan to have some plants to brighten up the environment.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但存在语法错误,如“help”应为“helped”,以及“such like”应为“such as”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,减少语气词。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I lived with my grandmother in a rural village. I helped her grow vegetables such as tomatoes and carrots, which saved money and provided fresh food. I mainly helped by watering the plants.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在明显语法和用词错误,如“quote much for the”不通顺,且“deploying the leaves”用词不当。建议加强基础词汇和表达的准确性,避免模糊和错误表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I know that overwatering plants can damage their roots and cause the leaves to wilt. Therefore, it's important to water them with the right amount of water, not too much.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,尤其是“plants cannot prevent good luck”与语境不符,应为“plants can bring good luck”。建议注意句子逻辑和词汇准确性,减少语气词。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts, especially when someone moves into a new home. Potted plants or flowers symbolize good luck and a fresh start, making them meaningful presents.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I don't have enough time and space for plant.

I don't have enough time and space for plants.

这里的plant应该用复数形式plants,因为指的是一般意义上的植物,表示不特指某一株植物。

Future tense issue

× I think I, uh, uh, keep some plants in my home to make the space more lively.

I think I will keep some plants in my home to make the space more lively.

表达将来打算时,应该使用将来时态will,而不是一般现在时keep。

Past tense issue

× I just help her to grow some vegetables such like tomatoes, uh, carrots and other vegetables.

I just helped her to grow some vegetables such as tomatoes, carrots and other vegetables.

描述过去的动作,动词help应该用过去式helped。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I just help her to grow some vegetables such like tomatoes, uh, carrots and other vegetables.

I just helped her to grow some vegetables such as tomatoes, carrots and other vegetables.

短语中应使用such as表示举例,而不是such like。

Past tense issue

× I just help her to water them.

I just helped her to water them.

描述过去的动作,动词help应该用过去式helped。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I know that you shouldn't quote much for the because it could actually damage its roots and deploying the leaves.

I know that you shouldn't water too much because it could actually damage its roots and cause the leaves to droop.

原句中quote much for the不合适,应该用water too much表示浇水过多;deploying the leaves用法错误,改为cause the leaves to droop更准确。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× his friend will send him a potted plant or flowers at house warming gifts.

his friend will send him a potted plant or flowers as housewarming gifts.

表达作为礼物时,应该用as而不是at。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× plants cannot prevent good luck or a fresh start.

plants can bring good luck or a fresh start.

原句中cannot prevent意思不通,应该用can bring表示带来好运或新的开始。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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