Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you keep plants at home?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I grew roses at my home because I think that their color can make my home look more welcoming and the roses is a symbol of water, whiter and cheerfulness. So I water them regularly to help them stay healthy.
Giám khảo
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, I tried to grow tomatoes on my balcony, but they didn't grow well because I had limited gardening skills and knowledge.
Giám khảo
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Thí sinh
A little I know that we should all water plants regularly and make sure they can get enough sunlight.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Thí sinh
Not very often, because the plants are cheaper and less formal than other gifts like cash, so people usually tend to give money or practical items for special occasions.
Do you keep plants at home?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然和准确,避免语法与词汇错误,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。可以先简短回答,随后给出具体原因与细节。注意名词单复数和搭配(例如“roses are”、“symbol of”应与具体含义匹配)。建议练习用一到两句解释原因,再用一句说明日常照顾方法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I keep plants at home. I grow roses because their bright colors make my home feel warm and welcoming, and I find them cheerful. I water them regularly and prune the dead stems every few weeks to keep them healthy.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答结构基本良好,但可以更具体说明遇到的问题和学到的经验以增加内容丰富度。使用连接词(for example, so)会让表达更连贯。保持句子简短自然,避免重复。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I tried to grow tomatoes on my balcony, but they didn't do well because I overwatered them and the pots lacked drainage. From that experience I learned to use bigger pots and water less frequently.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简短但可以更自然地组织。建议先直接回答(Yes/Only a little),然后用一两条具体技巧支持,如施肥、换盆或观察病虫害。使用连接词如‘for example’或‘also’能增强流畅性。
Ví dụ: Only a little. For example, I know plants need regular watering and sufficient sunlight, and it's also important to use proper soil and occasional fertilizer to promote growth.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 观点明确但表达可更地道,注意逻辑连接与词汇搭配(例如 ‘cheaper and less formal than cash’ 有些笨拙)。可以用简单对比和举例支持观点,使回答更具说服力。
Ví dụ: Not very often. In many cases people prefer to give cash or practical gifts for special occasions because those are considered more formal and useful, while plants are seen as informal and less common.
× I grew roses at my home because I think that their color can make my home look more welcoming and the roses is a symbol of water, whiter and cheerfulness.
✓ I grow roses at my home because I think that their color makes my home look more welcoming, and the roses are a symbol of purity, whiteness and cheerfulness.
错误类型:主谓一致/复数形式与动词或名词搭配不当。说明:原句中用“grew”(过去式)与后文“because I think”现在时不一致,应使用一般现在时“grow”。“the roses is”中“roses”为复数,应使用复数动词“are”。另外“water, whiter”词不合适,推测意为“纯洁、洁白”,改为“purity, whiteness”。建议:保持时态一致(此句表达一般事实用现在时),主语和动词在人称数上保持一致,名词形容词使用恰当的词汇。
× So I water them regularly to help them stay healthy.
✓ So I water them regularly to help them stay healthy.
错误类型:过去时问题。说明:原句实际上时态与语境一致(现在习惯性动作),无需改动。但原段中有过去式“grew”导致前后时态混用,已在上一句说明应统一用现在时。因此此句保持不变。建议:注意段落中所有句子时态一致,描述习惯性动作用一般现在时。
× When I was young, I tried to grow tomatoes on my balcony, but they didn't grow well because I had limited gardening skills and knowledge.
✓ When I was young, I tried to grow tomatoes on my balcony, but they didn't grow well because I had limited gardening skills and knowledge.
错误类型:过去时。说明:句子使用过去时描述过去经历,时态正确,无需修改。建议:保持过去时的一致性,句中动词形式和时态已正确。
× A little I know that we should all water plants regularly and make sure they can get enough sunlight.
✓ I only know a little: we should all water plants regularly and make sure they get enough sunlight.
错误类型:一般现在时/句子结构问题。说明:原句语序不自然,“A little I know”应改为“I only know a little”或“I know a little”。此外“make sure they can get enough sunlight”中的“can”并非必要,一般事实用现在时“get”。建议:调整语序以符合英语习惯,省略不必要的情态动词,使表达更简洁。
× Not very often, because the plants are cheaper and less formal than other gifts like cash, so people usually tend to give money or practical items for special occasions.
✓ Not very often, because plants are cheaper and less formal than other gifts like cash, so people usually tend to give money or practical items for special occasions.
错误类型:冠词使用/文章错误。说明:原句中“the plants”在泛指时不需定冠词,应改为“plants”。此外句子整体结构和时态均可接受。建议:当泛指某类事物时通常省略定冠词,以保持表达自然。