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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

No, I don't keep plants at home because it's the challenge for me to keep plants alive. I always forgot to water them and they died.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was a kid I planted a sunflowers in balcony. It's very it's grows very fast so I can see the change every day and is the yellow flowers is was char.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

No, I don't know, something about growing up that because I live in apartment so I didn't have space to grow in, uh, plants and uh, I always forget to, uh, forget to water them so I can, umm, grow a plant.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, Chinese people often send the plants as a gift because some plants is a symbol of for good luck and uh, wealthy, uh, such as bamboo, umm, people often send uh, uh, people who have new stores.

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Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答句要更直接并注意时态与语法,避免重复。可以先给出简短的主题句,然后用一两句具体原因支持,并用连接词衔接句子。注意动词时态和人称一致,避免多次连用“uh/umm”。

Ví dụ: No, I don’t keep plants at home. I find it difficult to look after them because I often forget to water them, so they usually die.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答应先直接回答问题并纠正冠词和单复数错误,接着用清晰的句子描述经历。使用连接词(for example, because, so)使叙述更连贯,并提供具体细节如地点、时间和感受,避免语法混乱。

Ví dụ: When I was a child I planted sunflowers on the balcony. They grew very fast, so I could see changes every day and I loved their bright yellow flowers.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理,先给出简洁的主题句,然后用一两句补充具体原因。注意用词准确(grow a plant vs. growing plants),避免重复和口头禅。补充可以包括是否愿意学习或计划如何改进。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t have much experience growing plants because I live in an apartment with limited space and I often forget to water them. However, I would like to learn simple indoor plant care in the future.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并使用恰当的名词与固定搭配,避免口头语。先肯定或否定,再说明原因并举例(例如哪个场合、哪些植物)。注意语法(plants are a symbol, wealthy → wealth)并结尾完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in China often give plants as gifts because some plants symbolize good luck and prosperity. For example, bamboo and money trees are commonly given to people who open a new shop.

Ngữ pháp

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× No, I don't keep plants at home because it's the challenge for me to keep plants alive.

No, I don't keep plants at home because it's a challenge for me to keep plants alive.

句子中 “it's the challenge” 用法不当。英語中表示“對我來說是一個挑戰”應使用不定冠詞 a,說成 “it's a challenge”。建議記住英語中職業、狀態或抽象名詞前常用不定冠詞 a/an 表示“一個……”。

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× I always forgot to water them and they died.

I always forget to water them and they die.

原句時態混用不當。上文為現在習慣(don't keep),所以應用一般現在時描述經常發生的事情:用 forget(一般現在)和 die(一般現在)。若想表過去事實,則全句應改為過去時(I always forgot ... and they died)。建議根據語境一致使用時態。

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× What plant did you grow when you were young?

What plant did you grow when you were young?

此句無需修改。時態正確,使用過去時詢問過去經歷。

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× When I was a kid I planted a sunflowers in balcony.

When I was a kid I planted a sunflower on the balcony.

存在單複數和冠詞、介詞錯誤。sunflowers 為複數但句中用 planted 表示種一株,應用單數 sunflower 並加不定冠詞 a;另外應使用介詞 on the balcony 而不是 in balcony。建議注意單複數和常見介詞搭配(on the balcony)。

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× It's very it's grows very fast so I can see the change every day and is the yellow flowers is was char.

It grew very fast so I could see the changes every day, and the yellow flowers were very charming.

原句有多處錯誤:時態、冗餘詞、主謂不一致及詞語選擇。因為談過去經歷,用過去時(grew, could);“it's very it's grows” 是冗贅且語法錯誤;“is the yellow flowers is was char” 應表達花是迷人的,用 were(複數過去)和形容詞 charming。建議簡化句子結構,保持時態一致並使用正確形容詞。

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× Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Do you know anything about growing plants?

原句中不定冠詞 a 與動名詞短語搭配不自然。一般詢問某種技能或知識時,用 growing plants(泛指種植植物)更自然。建議在表示一般性知識時使用複數或無冠詞的名詞。

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× No, I don't know, something about growing up that because I live in apartment so I didn't have space to grow in, uh, plants and uh, I always forget to, uh, forget to water them so I can, umm, grow a plant.

No, I don't know much about growing plants because I live in an apartment so I don't have space to grow them, and I always forget to water them, so I can't grow a plant.

原句結構混亂、時態和冠詞錯誤。主要問題包括:'something about growing up that' 無意義;apartment 前需不定冠詞 an;時態需與現在情況一致(I don't have);'so I can... grow a plant' 與前句矛盾,應為 can't 表示不能成功種植。建議重新組織句子,保持時態一致,使用正確冠詞並刪除多餘填充詞。

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× Uh, yes, Chinese people often send the plants as a gift because some plants is a symbol of for good luck and uh, wealthy, uh, such as bamboo, umm, people often send uh, uh, people who have new stores.

Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts because some plants are symbols of good luck and prosperity, such as bamboo; people often give them to shop owners who have new stores.

此句包含多處介詞、冠詞、主謂一致和詞彙使用錯誤:'send the plants as a gift' 應為 send plants as gifts(習慣性行為用複數);'some plants is' 主謂不一致,應用 are;'a symbol of for' 多餘介詞且用詞不當,應為 symbols of good luck and prosperity(wealthy 是形容詞,應用名詞 prosperity);最後關係不清楚,應明確給出的對象(shop owners)。建議注意主謂一致、介詞搭配和詞類正確性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FastSpeedy; Secure; Indelible; Promiscuous; Quickly
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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