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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Suddenly I plant some flowers on terrace such as roses and tulips because flowers can make me feel peaceful and relaxing, especially when I feel down, I will watch them.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was in middle school I planted a cactus because I didn't have so much time to water it. As you know, cactus is a plant from desert, so it grow wells with little care and survived even when I forgot it.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

I just know a little about it, but when I decide to start I usually search for information online such as watching tutorial videos and I will focus how to choose soil and watery frequency. Also the.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

Yes, many Chinese people give plans as a gift because some plants have symbolic meanings, especially some are thought to bring good health and happiness. For example, Lucky Boo bamboo are often be a gift.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 句子表达有用意,但存在语法错误、用词不当和冗长问题。回答应更直接地回应问题,并控制在不超过5句内。注意时态(一般现在用‘I plant’不自然),冠词和单复数(e.g. 'a terrace' 或 'the terrace','roses and tulips'正确),以及连接词的自然使用。可增加一两条具体细节(例如哪里买的、如何打理)以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep several potted flowers on my terrace, such as roses and tulips. They make me feel peaceful and help me relax when I'm stressed. I usually water them every two days and prune dead leaves weekly. I bought most of them from a local nursery near my home.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰且相关,但有语法和词汇错误。注意时态和主谓一致('it grow wells' 应为 'it grew well' 或 'it grows well'),定冠词和冠词使用也要准确('a cactus')。可以补充一两句具体情境(例如放在哪里、学习中如何照顾)以增加细节。避免重复信息。

Ví dụ: In middle school I had a small cactus because I didn’t have much time to care for plants. It grew well with minimal watering and survived occasional neglect. I kept it on my study desk, which made my room feel more lively.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误与结尾未完成。应先给出直接回答(e.g. 'Yes, a little'),然后用一两句具体说明学习途径和关注点,使用恰当的短语('watering frequency'而不是 'watery frequency'),并避免口语碎片。保持语言连贯并完成句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I know a little. When I want to grow a plant I usually watch tutorial videos and read articles online. I pay special attention to choosing the right soil and the correct watering frequency for each species.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题且有文化信息,但存在拼写和语法问题('plans'→'plants'; 'Lucky Boo bamboo'表达不准确,应为 'lucky bamboo')。注意单复数和冠词使用('are often given as a gift')。可增加一两句具体例子或场合(例如新居入伙、开业)以使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese people give plants as gifts because certain plants symbolize good fortune and health. For example, lucky bamboo is commonly given for housewarmings or business openings to wish prosperity. People also choose orchids or money trees for similar reasons.

Ngữ pháp

Verb tense / word choice and pluralization errors

× Suddenly I plant some flowers on terrace such as roses and tulips because flowers can make me feel peaceful and relaxing, especially when I feel down, I will watch them.

Sometimes I plant some flowers on the terrace, such as roses and tulips, because flowers make me feel peaceful and relaxed; especially when I feel down, I watch them.

问题类型:6 (现在时) 和 13 (形容词/副词) 以及 1 (单复数) 与 11 (介词) 的混合错误。解释:原句用'suddenly'不合上下文,表示习惯应使用'sometimes'或'occasionally';动词'to plant'在此句应使用一般现在时表示习惯,去掉多余的将来时'will';'on terrace'缺少定冠词'the';'make me feel peaceful and relaxing'中'relaxing'是现在分词作宾补,含义是'令人放松的',而应使用形容词'relaxed'表达感受到放松的状态。建议:用表示频率的副词替换'suddenly',使用一般现在时描述习惯,注意冠词使用和形容词/副词选择。

Past tense issue and subject-verb agreement

× When I was in middle school I planted a cactus because I didn't have so much time to water it. As you know, cactus is a plant from desert, so it grow wells with little care and survived even when I forgot it.

When I was in middle school I planted a cactus because I didn't have much time to water it. As you know, a cactus is a plant from the desert, so it grows well with little care and survived even when I forgot it.

问题类型:5 (过去时), 1 (单复数), 11 (介词) 与 27 (主谓一致)。解释:'so much time'用于不可数常量时可以用,但更自然的是'much time';'cactus is a plant from desert'缺少不定冠词'a'且'desert'前需定冠词'the'表特指生态环境;'so it grow wells'主谓不一致,单数主语需用'grows',并且'well'是副词,不能写成'wells'。'survived even when I forgot it'时态可以保留为过去,因为前句是过去。建议:注意冠词使用(a/an, the),主谓一致和副词形式,避免把形容词误用为副词。

Present tense and verb phrase / gerund

× I just know a little about it, but when I decide to start I usually search for information online such as watching tutorial videos and I will focus how to choose soil and watery frequency. Also the.

I only know a little about it, but when I decide to start I usually search for information online, such as watching tutorial videos, and I focus on how to choose soil and watering frequency.

问题类型:6 (现在时), 8 (动词+ -ing 形式), 11 (介词) 与 13 (形容词/副词)。解释:'I just know'更自然为'I only know';'when I decide to start'若指习惯用一般现在时可以保留'decide',但语义更自然用'when I decide to start'结合现在时或将来时均可;'search for information online such as watching tutorial videos'中'such as'后应接名词短语或动名词,'watching tutorial videos'可接受;'I will focus how to choose soil and watery frequency'中'focus'后需要介词'on'并且'watery frequency'不正确,应为'watering frequency'或'how often to water'。句尾孤立的'Also the.'为残句,应删除或补全。建议:使用正确的介词短语('focus on'),用动名词'watering'表示浇水频率,删除不完整的句子片段。

Spelling and noun form, passive/verb form

× Yes, many Chinese people give plans as a gift because some plants have symbolic meanings, especially some are thought to bring good health and happiness. For example, Lucky Boo bamboo are often be a gift.

Yes, many Chinese people give plants as gifts because some plants have symbolic meanings; for example, lucky bamboo is often given as a gift.

问题类型:1 (单复数), 21 (被动语态) 与 22 (冠词/文章错误) 及 13 (词形)。解释:原句中'give plans'是拼写错误,应用'plants';'give ... as a gift'中'gift'可用复数形式与复数主语对应;'Lucky Boo bamboo'可能是'lucky bamboo'的错误写法,且该短语作为单一植物名词常用单数或不可数形式,后半句'are often be a gift'语法不正确,应改为' is often given as a gift'使用被动语态的正确结构并保证动词形式正确。建议:检查拼写,使用正确的被动结构'be + past participle'(is/are given),并确保植物名称拼写和大小写规范。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
LuckyFortunate; Providential
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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