Stories— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and fluent by avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Also, use correct grammar such as 'stories teach us moral values' instead of 'stories have a value which learn us'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved stories in my childhood because they taught me important moral values that helped shape my character.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve grammar by saying 'I often listened to stories from my grandparents'. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent, for example, 'because' to explain your preference. Keep sentences clear and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I prefer listening to stories rather than reading because, as a child, I often listened to my grandparents' stories, which made me feel comfortable and connected.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar by using plural forms correctly, e.g., 'stories' instead of 'story' and 'these stories were'. Avoid filler words and provide clearer examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I wrote many stories as a child because they were part of our school curriculum. For example, I wrote stories like 'The Thirsty Crow', 'The Lion and the Mice', and 'Clever Folks'.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent by removing filler words and completing your thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference clearly. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: I like stories that have moral values because they teach us how to solve problems and help increase our confidence.

× I prefer listening to stories rather than reading because in my childhood I often uh, listen story from my grandparents.

✓ I prefer listening to stories rather than reading because in my childhood I often listened to stories from my grandparents.

The verb 'listen' should be in the past tense 'listened' to match the past time reference 'in my childhood'. Also, the phrase should be 'listened to stories' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.

× I wrote a lot of story in my childhood, umm, because uh, this story are related to our school curriculum.

✓ I wrote a lot of stories in my childhood, umm, because uh, these stories are related to our school curriculum.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'this story are' is incorrect; it should be 'these stories are' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun with the plural noun.

× Uh, these stories like, uh, uh, thirsty Crow, uh, Lion and the mice and uh, even clever folks.

✓ Uh, these stories are like, uh, the Thirsty Crow, uh, the Lion and the Mice, and uh, even Clever Folks.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' to link the subject and complement. Also, story titles should be capitalized and preceded by 'the' as they are specific titles. 'Mice' is plural and should be capitalized as part of the title.

× Yes, I love stories in my childhood because, uh, stories have, uh, a value which learn us the moral values of life.

✓ Yes, I loved stories in my childhood because, uh, stories have, uh, a value which teaches us the moral values of life.

The verb tense 'love' should be past 'loved' to match 'in my childhood'. The relative clause 'which learn us' is incorrect; it should be 'which teaches us' because 'which' refers to 'a value' (singular), so the verb should be third person singular 'teaches', and 'learn us' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'teaches us'.

× Uh, so uh, uh, I feel more comfortable to listening the story.

✓ Uh, so uh, uh, I feel more comfortable listening to the story.

The phrase 'comfortable to listening' is incorrect; after 'comfortable' we use the gerund form without 'to', so 'comfortable listening'. Also, 'listening the story' should be 'listening to the story' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.