Colours— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, ví dụ như 'yellows is' nên là 'yellow is'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: My favorite colour is yellow because it is bright and cheerful. It always lifts my mood and inspires me to be positive and active.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh dùng câu hỏi tu từ như 'Why I dislike dark color?' mà nên trả lời trực tiếp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp như 'refer' nên là 'prefer'.

Ví dụ: I dislike dark colours because they often make me feel sad or gloomy. For instance, I usually avoid wearing dark clothes since I believe they bring negative energy. Instead, I prefer bright colours that make me feel cheerful and positive.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'she very like the blue' nên là 'she really likes blue'. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I think everyone has their favourite colour. My best friend told me that she really likes blue, especially a bright shade called master blue. She doesn't like dark blue because it feels sad, but light blue makes her feel peaceful and happy.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'affect my more negatively' nên là 'affects me negatively'. Câu cuối cùng cũng cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ 'refer'. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: The colour that makes me uncomfortable in my room is definitely dark purple. It creates a gloomy and heavy atmosphere that affects me negatively. Therefore, I prefer to have lighter and more cheerful colours instead.

× yellow can bring the joyfulness to everyone and yellows is a bright color

✓ yellow can bring joyfulness to everyone and yellow is a bright color

The word 'yellows' is incorrectly pluralized here. 'Yellow' as a color is uncountable and should be singular. Also, 'joyfulness' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× it's inspired me to do a lot of thing which means positive and happy

✓ it inspires me to do a lot of things which means positivity and happiness

The verb 'inspired' is incorrectly used in past participle form here; present tense 'inspires' fits better. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things'. 'Positive and happy' are adjectives; nouns 'positivity and happiness' are more appropriate.

× Why I dislike dark color?

✓ Why do I dislike dark colors?

The sentence is a question and requires auxiliary 'do' for correct question structure. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colors' to match general meaning.

× Instead, I refer bright colors that make me feel more cheerful and positive.

✓ Instead, I prefer bright colors that make me feel more cheerful and positive.

The verb 'refer' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express liking.

× However with my best friend she told to me that she very like the blue especially the master blue with not the dark one because the dark one is being sad but the light Blues mean peace and happy so she really like it.

✓ However, my best friend told me that she really likes blue, especially master blue, not the dark one because the dark one is sad but light blues mean peace and happiness, so she really likes it.

Incorrect pronoun usage and word order. 'Told to me' should be 'told me'. 'She very like' should be 'she really likes'. 'Being sad' should be 'is sad'. 'Light Blues' should be 'light blues'. 'Happy' should be noun 'happiness'.

× The color that made me feel uncomfortable in my rooms is definitely dark purple.

✓ The color that makes me feel uncomfortable in my room is definitely dark purple.

'Rooms' should be singular 'room' to match context. 'Made' should be present tense 'makes' to fit the question's present context.

× I find that it creates A gloomy and heavy atmosphere which affect my more negatively so that I don't really like it.

✓ I find that it creates a gloomy and heavy atmosphere which affects me more negatively, so I don't really like it.

Capitalization error with 'A'. 'Affect' should be 'affects' to agree with singular subject 'atmosphere'. 'My' should be 'me'.

× But I refer to avoid having.

✓ But I prefer to avoid having it.

'Refer to' is incorrect; 'prefer to' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'it' to clarify.

× I refer to having a lighter or more cheerful colorful instead.

✓ I prefer having a lighter or more cheerful color instead.

'Refer to' should be 'prefer'. 'Colorful' is an adjective; the noun 'color' is needed here.