Part 1
Giám khảo
What's your favorite colour?
Thí sinh
My favorite color is pink in my life when I saw pink things I will buy it.
Giám khảo
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Thí sinh
I don't like black because it looks like a darkness and no color on it.
Giám khảo
What colours do your friends like most?
Thí sinh
Green is the color my friends like the most because it's the color in the nature.
Giám khảo
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Thí sinh
In my room, Gray makes me uncomfortable because it looks like unclean and I don't like it.
What's your favorite colour?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不够清晰,句子结构混乱。建议用更自然的表达方式,避免重复,并且句子简洁明了。
Ví dụ: My favorite color is pink because I find it cheerful and it always brightens my mood. Whenever I see pink items, I feel attracted to them and often buy them.
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达较为简单,缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议使用连接词丰富句子,并具体说明为什么不喜欢黑色。
Ví dụ: I don't like black because it often gives a gloomy feeling and seems dull to me. Moreover, it lacks brightness, which makes it less appealing.
What colours do your friends like most?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,但缺少细节和更自然的表达。建议增加具体原因,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Most of my friends prefer green because it reminds them of nature and brings a sense of calmness. Additionally, green is associated with growth and freshness.
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,语法错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇描述感受,并且句子结构更完整。
Ví dụ: The color gray in my room makes me feel uncomfortable because it appears dull and somewhat dirty. I prefer brighter colors that create a more cheerful atmosphere.
× My favorite color is pink in my life when I saw pink things I will buy it.
✓ My favorite color is pink. When I see pink things, I buy them.
句子中时态混乱,'saw'是过去时,但句意应表达习惯性动作,需用一般现在时'see','will buy'改为一般现在时'buy'。此外,句子应拆分为两句以增强清晰度。
× I don't like black because it looks like a darkness and no color on it.
✓ I don't like black because it looks like darkness and has no color.
darkness是不可数名词,前面不应加不定冠词'a'。此外,'no color on it'表达不自然,改为'has no color'更符合英语习惯。
× Green is the color my friends like the most because it's the color in the nature.
✓ Green is the color my friends like the most because it's the color in nature.
'nature'作为抽象名词,前面通常不加定冠词'the'。
× In my room, Gray makes me uncomfortable because it looks like unclean and I don't like it.
✓ In my room, gray makes me uncomfortable because it looks unclean and I don't like it.
'unclean'是形容词,前面不应加'like',应直接用'looks unclean'。此外,颜色名词前不需大写,除非是专有名词。