Colours— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains minor errors such as repeating 'mom'. Try to be more concise and clear. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with linking words like 'because' or 'since'.

Ví dụ: My favourite colour is white because it blends well with other colours, making them look brighter and more vibrant. I have liked it since I was a child, partly because my mother also prefers white for this reason.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases such as 'too on vitality'. Try to use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by reasons. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain your opinion clearly.

Ví dụ: I dislike brown because it feels dull and lifeless to me. It reminds me of mud and dirt, which I find unappealing. Since I am an energetic person, I prefer brighter colours that reflect my personality.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains a vocabulary error ('analyzes freedom') and lacks clarity. Use appropriate words and explain your ideas clearly. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: My friends like various colours, but most of them prefer blue because it represents freedom and reminds them of the sky.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors such as 'makes my room seems'. Try to use correct verb forms and link your ideas smoothly. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: Brown makes me uncomfortable in my room because it makes the space look dirty and unorganised. As a result, the room does not feel like a pleasant place to relax.

× My mom mom said that she likes white cause every color mixing with white is a great color so that's why I like white.

✓ My mom said that she likes white because every color mixed with white is a great color, so that's why I like white.

The phrase 'mom mom' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'mom'. The word 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for clarity. The phrase 'every color mixing with white' is incorrect; it should be 'every color mixed with white' to use the past participle form correctly, indicating a completed action. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× I don't really like brown 'cause it's too on vitality, it reminds me of mud and dirt and I prefer brighter colors because I'm more kind of energetic person.

✓ I don't really like brown because it's too dull; it reminds me of mud and dirt, and I prefer brighter colours because I'm more of an energetic person.

The phrase 'too on vitality' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'too dull' or 'lacking vitality'. The conjunctions and punctuation need correction for clarity: replacing the comma with a semicolon after 'dull' and adding commas appropriately. Also, 'more kind of energetic person' is incorrect; it should be 'more of an energetic person' to use the correct preposition and article.

× My friends all like different colors but most of them like blue because it analyzes freedom and maybe the sky.

✓ My friends all like different colours, but most of them like blue because it symbolises freedom and maybe the sky.

The verb 'analyzes' is incorrectly used; the intended meaning is likely 'symbolises' or 'represents'. Also, a comma is needed before 'but' to separate the clauses. The spelling 'colors' should be consistent with British English as 'colours'.

× Brown because brown makes my room seems really dirty and not clean.

✓ Brown, because brown makes my room seem really dirty and unclean.

The verb 'seems' should be 'seem' to agree with the subject 'brown' which is singular and used as a general statement here. Also, 'not clean' is better expressed as 'unclean' for conciseness. A comma is needed after 'Brown' to separate the clauses.

× It doesn't make the room seems very organized and a nice place to stay.

✓ It doesn't make the room seem very organised or a nice place to stay.

The verb 'seems' should be 'seem' to agree with the subject 'the room'. The conjunction 'and' should be replaced with 'or' to correctly link the two negative qualities. The spelling 'organized' should be 'organised' in British English.