Colours— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

Ví dụ: My favorite colour is blue because it reminds me of the clear sky, which makes me feel fresh and motivated. Additionally, blue represents the deep ocean, symbolizing calmness and positivity.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Avoid filler words and ensure your reasons are clear and relevant. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific explanations.

Ví dụ: I dislike the colour brown because it seems dull and unappealing to me. Although brown is the colour of chocolate, which I enjoy eating, I don't find the colour itself attractive.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Most of my friends prefer the colour green because they love nature. Since they work in environmental fields, especially in planting, they are naturally attracted to green, which represents plants and growth.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Avoid vague expressions and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: The colour black makes me feel uncomfortable in my room because it gives me negative feelings. It reminds me of problems and stress, which affects my mood negatively.

× I tend to feel like blue color because it remind me of blue sky which makes me really fresh and motivated.

✓ I tend to feel like blue color because it reminds me of the blue sky which makes me really fresh and motivated.

The verb 'remind' should be in the third person singular form 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'blue sky' should have the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific sky.

× Blue reflects to the deep ocean which have positive nature.

✓ Blue reflects the deep ocean which has a positive nature.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'ocean'. Also, 'reflects to' is incorrect; it should be 'reflects' without 'to'. Additionally, 'positive nature' should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× I don't like the brown color because it reminds me of more.

✓ I don't like the brown color because it reminds me of mud.

The original sentence is unclear; 'more' is likely a mistake. Assuming the intended word is 'mud' or something similar. Also, 'reminds me of' requires a clear object.

× It's really dotty.

✓ It is really spotty.

'Dotty' is informal and may not convey the intended meaning. 'Spotty' or 'dotted' is more appropriate to describe a pattern. Also, the sentence is short and lacks context; improving clarity is suggested.

× I also like to eat chocolate but I don't didn't like.

✓ I also like to eat chocolate but I didn't like it.

The phrase 'don't didn't like' is incorrect; only one auxiliary verb should be used. Since the sentence refers to past dislike, 'didn't like' is correct. Also, 'it' is needed to complete the sentence.

× Most of my friends like the green color because they are natural lover poison.

✓ Most of my friends like the green color because they are natural lovers of poison.

The phrase 'natural lover poison' is incorrect. It should be 'natural lovers of poison' if that is the intended meaning. However, this phrase is unusual; possibly 'natural lovers of nature' was intended.

× They work in environment area so they are basically work in planting section.

✓ They work in the environmental area, so they basically work in the planting section.

'Environment area' should be 'environmental area' with the definite article 'the'. Also, 'are basically work' is incorrect; it should be 'basically work'.

× The plant are in green colours so they love to evolve in and attract in green color.

✓ The plants are green, so they love to be involved with and attracted to the green color.

'Plant' should be plural 'plants' to agree with 'are'. 'Green colours' should be 'green colors' or 'green color' consistently. The phrase 'love to evolve in and attract in' is incorrect; it should be 'love to be involved with and attracted to'.

× The most irritable colour that makes me stressful or uncomfortable in my room is that black colour.

✓ The most irritating color that makes me stressed or uncomfortable in my room is black.

'Irritable' is an adjective describing a person, 'irritating' describes the color. 'Stressful' should be 'stressed' to describe the feeling. 'That black colour' should be 'black' without 'that' or 'the'.

× Because black colour feels me negative points towards my brain.

✓ Because the black color gives me negative feelings in my mind.

'Feels me' is incorrect; the color cannot 'feel' someone. The sentence should express that the color causes negative feelings. 'Negative points towards my brain' is unclear; 'negative feelings in my mind' is clearer.

× It also reflects the negative side of every problem and that's.

✓ It also reflects the negative side of every problem, and that's why I dislike it.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a concluding clause clarifies the meaning.