Part 1
Giám khảo
What's your favorite colour?
Thí sinh
I think my favorite color is definitely the black because I think it's very essential for our daily life. For example, I have many shoes and trousers are blacks. I think it's very useful and practic and I think this color can be a very easily to compare my outfits.
Giám khảo
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Thí sinh
I think my dislike color is definitely the white because it's less practical and versatile in my daily life. For example, most of my shoes and trousers are black, which makes easy to match different outfits. But if you wear white clothes, you need to be careful because you don't want it dirty.
Giám khảo
What colours do your friends like most?
Thí sinh
My friend's favorite color is also the black because we have the same taste and same interest. So we are close friend and we also have the same favorite color. We always have a lot of black outfits. I think it can really reflect our same outfits and taste.
Giám khảo
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Thí sinh
I think pink may makes me feel uncomfortable in my room. I think the pink is a little negative and childish. It's also very unpractical. If you have some pink stuff you may be extra careful. You don't want it dirty, right?
What's your favorite colour?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和用词有些错误,且表达不够自然。建议注意单复数和形容词的正确使用,避免重复表达,并且用更地道的表达方式。
Ví dụ: My favorite color is definitely black because it is very versatile in daily life. For instance, I own many black shoes and trousers, which makes it easy to match with different outfits.
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好,但语言表达稍显重复且有语法错误。建议丰富词汇,避免重复,并注意句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: I dislike white because it is less practical and easy to get dirty. Since most of my clothes are black, which are easier to match, white clothes require more care to keep clean.
What colours do your friends like most?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,且内容较为简单。建议使用更多连接词,丰富句型,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: My friends also prefer black because we share similar tastes and interests. We often wear black outfits, which reflects our common style and friendship.
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达中有语法错误,且观点表达不够具体。建议用更准确的词汇描述感受,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: Pink makes me feel uncomfortable in my room because it seems childish and impractical. Also, pink items can easily get dirty, so I would have to be very careful with them.
× I think my favorite color is definitely the black because I think it's very essential for our daily life.
✓ I think my favorite color is definitely black because I think it's very essential for our daily life.
在英语中,颜色名称前通常不加定冠词“the”,除非特指某个具体的颜色。这里说的是颜色的一般概念,所以不需要“the”。
× For example, I have many shoes and trousers are blacks.
✓ For example, I have many shoes and trousers that are black.
“trousers”是复数名词,形容词“black”不需要加复数形式“blacks”。此外,句子结构需要调整以使其更通顺。
× I think it's very useful and practic and I think this color can be a very easily to compare my outfits.
✓ I think it's very useful and practical, and I think this color can be very easy to match with my outfits.
“practic”应为“practical”,形容词拼写错误。“a very easily”结构错误,应为“very easy”。“compare my outfits”用词不当,应该是“match my outfits”。
× I think my dislike color is definitely the white because it's less practical and versatile in my daily life.
✓ I think my disliked color is definitely white because it's less practical and versatile in my daily life.
“dislike color”应为“disliked color”,形容词形式错误。颜色前不加“the”。
× For example, most of my shoes and trousers are black, which makes easy to match different outfits.
✓ For example, most of my shoes and trousers are black, which makes it easy to match different outfits.
缺少形式主语“it”,使句子完整。
× But if you wear white clothes, you need to be careful because you don't want it dirty.
✓ But if you wear white clothes, you need to be careful because you don't want them dirty.
“clothes”是复数,代词应使用“them”而非“it”。
× My friend's favorite color is also the black because we have the same taste and same interest.
✓ My friends' favorite color is also black because we have the same taste and same interests.
“friend's”应为复数所有格“friends'”,表示多个朋友。颜色前不加“the”。“interest”应为复数“interests”。
× So we are close friend and we also have the same favorite color.
✓ So we are close friends and we also have the same favorite color.
“friend”应为复数“friends”,表示多个朋友。
× We always have a lot of black outfits.
✓ We always have a lot of black outfits.
此句无语法错误,无需修改。
× I think it can really reflect our same outfits and taste.
✓ I think it can really reflect our similar outfits and taste.
“same outfits and taste”表达不自然,改为“similar outfits and taste”更合适。
× I think pink may makes me feel uncomfortable in my room.
✓ I think pink may make me feel uncomfortable in my room.
情态动词“may”后应接动词原形,“makes”应改为“make”。
× I think the pink is a little negative and childish.
✓ I think pink is a little negative and childish.
颜色前通常不加定冠词“the”,除非特指。
× It's also very unpractical.
✓ It's also very impractical.
“unpractical”不是标准词汇,正确词为“impractical”。
× If you have some pink stuff you may be extra careful.
✓ If you have some pink stuff, you may need to be extra careful.
句子缺少逗号,且“may be extra careful”表达不够准确,改为“may need to be extra careful”更自然。
× You don't want it dirty, right?
✓ You don't want it to get dirty, right?
“want it dirty”表达不完整,应为“want it to get dirty”,表示不希望它变脏。