Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and shows understanding, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "more example" and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, try to limit your answer to 4-5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe I am good at giving gifts because I pay close attention to my loved ones' interests and preferences. For example, I notice what they like or need, which helps me select thoughtful presents that they truly appreciate.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be specific about occasions and explain briefly why gifts are given.

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays and festivals like Diwali and Holi. In our country, people exchange gifts during these times to offer blessings and good wishes.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect in places. Use clearer sentences and linking words to express your thoughts logically. Avoid repeating phrases and focus on clarity.

Ví dụ: When choosing a gift, I consider the emotions it will evoke. I try to select something that reminds the recipient of happy memories, so when they see the gift in the future, it brings a smile to their face and makes them remember me fondly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain the situation clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses and repetitions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once made a handmade gift for my mother when she was going on a trip. It was a goodbye card to wish her good luck and show my affection.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak confidently and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe expensive gifts can better express our feelings because they show how much we care. For instance, I gave my girlfriend a Rado watch, and she felt very happy and special.

× I always try to learn more about their interest and preferences more example, I pay attention to what they like or need, which helps me choose thoughtful presents that they truly appreciate.

✓ I always try to learn more about their interests and preferences. For example, I pay attention to what they like or need, which helps me choose thoughtful presents that they truly appreciate.

The phrase 'more example' is incorrect; it should be 'For example' to introduce an example properly. Also, 'interest' should be plural 'interests' to match the context of multiple preferences.

× I always try to learn more about their interest and preferences more example, I pay attention to what they like or need, which helps me choose thoughtful presents that they truly appreciate.

✓ I always try to learn more about their interests and preferences. For example, I pay attention to what they like or need, which helps me choose thoughtful presents that they truly appreciate.

The word 'interest' should be plural 'interests' because it refers to multiple things that the loved ones may be interested in.

× I usually give gifts to others on and locations of birthday and festivals like Diwali and Holi.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on occasions like birthdays and festivals such as Diwali and Holi.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and missing words. 'On and locations of birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'on occasions like birthdays'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to generalize the statement.

× In our country. People usually give gifts. To others. For blessings.

✓ In our country, people usually give gifts to others for blessings.

The original sentence is fragmented with unnecessary full stops. It should be combined into one coherent sentence with proper punctuation.

× When I choose a gift, I always consider emotions behind it and I always try to make them remind of my of my pleasant gift which I had given to them.

✓ When I choose a gift, I always consider the emotions behind it and try to make them remember my pleasant gift which I have given to them.

The phrase 'make them remind of' is incorrect; it should be 'make them remember'. Also, 'of my of my' is a repetition error. 'Had given' is changed to 'have given' to match present perfect tense appropriate here.

× And if they look the gift in future, they always have a great happiness on his face and they try to Remember Me and being emotional.

✓ And if they look at the gift in the future, they always have great happiness on their faces and try to remember me and feel emotional.

'Look the gift' should be 'look at the gift'. 'His face' is incorrect as the subject is plural; it should be 'their faces'. 'Remember Me' should be lowercase 'remember me'. 'Being emotional' should be 'feel emotional' for correct verb usage.

× Yes, I had given others a handmade gift of which had been made by me for my mother's.

✓ Yes, I have given others a handmade gift which was made by me for my mother.

The past perfect tense 'had given' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have given' is appropriate. 'Mother's' is possessive and incorrect; it should be 'my mother'.

× I was. Making a gift for my mother. A goodbye wishes becauses she was going on a trip and I want to wish him a good luck.

✓ I was making a gift for my mother as a goodbye wish because she was going on a trip and I wanted to wish her good luck.

The original sentence is fragmented and has errors: 'A goodbye wishes' should be 'a goodbye wish'. 'Becauses' is misspelled; correct is 'because'. 'I want to wish him' should be 'I wanted to wish her' to match past tense and correct pronoun.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This is a question from the examiner and is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Yes, I think that expensive gifts can make people feel better and express our feelings in a. Better way? For instance, I had given a gift of. Rado watch to my girlfriend and she was happy and feeling special.

✓ Yes, I think that expensive gifts can make people feel better and express our feelings in a better way. For instance, I gave a Rado watch to my girlfriend and she was happy and felt special.

The past perfect 'had given' is incorrect here; simple past 'gave' is appropriate. 'Feeling special' should be 'felt special' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, unnecessary full stops are removed for sentence clarity.