Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at giving gifts?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not good at giving gifts to be quiet. I think it's hard to shoot skate something suitable, for example when I need to give my friends or family gives. I may I may worry that they don't like the gift.
Giám khảo
When do you usually give gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Are you only gave others caves in special days? For example, I will give my teachers. Gave. Uhm, teacher state. I think it is the respect for teachers.
Giám khảo
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
Thí sinh
I will. Consider the. Ability of the gift. Are you only? Gave the gift that they can use in their daily life.
Giám khảo
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
Thí sinh
I just gave others who is very important for me. 100 made gift for example I have gave my mother like lace that I'm made by myself.
Giám khảo
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
Thí sinh
No. I think the price of the gift is not important. And but I think the. Meaning of the gates is the most important. For example, the necklace I made by myself. I think he is.
Are you good at giving gifts?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够清晰,语法和用词有误,导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I often find it hard to choose something suitable. For example, when I give gifts to my friends or family, I worry that they might not like them.
When do you usually give gifts to others?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯,句子结构混乱,表达不清楚。建议直接回答问题,使用完整句子,并提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: I usually give gifts to others on special occasions, such as birthdays or holidays. For example, I like to give gifts to my teachers to show my respect.
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且断断续续,表达不流畅。建议完整表达观点,并用连词连接句子,使回答更自然。
Ví dụ: When choosing a gift, I consider its usefulness. I prefer to give gifts that the recipient can use in their daily life.
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达有语法错误,句子不完整。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构,清楚描述经历。
Ví dụ: I have given handmade gifts only to people who are very important to me. For example, I made a lace gift for my mother by myself.
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中断且语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. The meaning behind the gift is more important. For example, I made a necklace myself to show my feelings.
× No, I'm not good at giving gifts to be quiet.
✓ No, I'm not good at giving gifts quietly.
这里使用了错误的连词短语“to be quiet”,应使用副词“quietly”来修饰动词“giving”,表示“安静地送礼”。
× I think it's hard to shoot skate something suitable, for example when I need to give my friends or family gives.
✓ I think it's hard to choose something suitable, for example when I need to give gifts to my friends or family.
原句中“shoot skate”是错误的词组,应为“choose”;“gives”用法错误,应为“gifts”;缺少介词“to”连接“give”和“my friends or family”。
× I may I may worry that they don't like the gift.
✓ I may worry that they don't like the gift.
重复使用“may”是多余的,应去掉一个。
× Are you only gave others caves in special days?
✓ Do you only give gifts to others on special days?
句子时态错误,疑问句应使用一般现在时“do you give”,而非过去时“gave”。
× For example, I will give my teachers. Gave. Uhm, teacher state.
✓ For example, I will give gifts to my teachers.
句子结构混乱,时态应统一为将来时“will give”,且“gave”不应单独出现。
× I will. Consider the. Ability of the gift. Are you only? Gave the gift that they can use in their daily life.
✓ I will consider the usefulness of the gift. I only give gifts that they can use in their daily life.
句子断裂且用词错误,“ability of the gift”应为“usefulness of the gift”;“Are you only? Gave”语法错误,应改为“I only give”。
× I just gave others who is very important for me. 100 made gift for example I have gave my mother like lace that I'm made by myself.
✓ I only give handmade gifts to people who are very important to me. For example, I have given my mother lace that I made by myself.
时态错误,“gave”应为“give”或“have given”;“who is”应为“who are”;“100 made gift”应为“handmade gifts”;“I'm made”应为“I made”。
× No. I think the price of the gift is not important. And but I think the. Meaning of the gates is the most important. For example, the necklace I made by myself. I think he is.
✓ No. I think the price of the gift is not important, but I think the meaning of the gift is the most important. For example, the necklace I made by myself. I think it is.
“And but”重复连词,应去掉“and”;“gates”应为“gift”;“he is”指代错误,应为“it is”。