Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免冗长且不连贯的句子。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often give gifts to my parents, friends, and classmates. For example, last year I gave my friend a door-shaped pillow, and she still sleeps with it every day.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，建议使用完整句子并注意时态和冠词的使用。同时，内容应更具体，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts to my parents on their birthdays. Also, when my friends get good grades, I like to congratulate them with a present. They always feel happy and appreciated.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确表达“价格”、“质量”和“外观”的重要性，使用正确的语法和连词，使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: When choosing a gift, I consider its price, quality, and appearance. It should be affordable, well-made, and look nice because my friends appreciate these qualities.

Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符，应该谈自己是否送过手工礼物，而非别人送给自己的。建议直接回答问题并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have given handmade gifts before. For example, last year I made a flower for my friend's birthday. It was beautiful, and she really liked it.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，使用正确的语法和连词，突出情感比价格更重要的观点。

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters most is the true feelings behind the gift, not its price.

× Yes I frequent give my parents, friends, classmates gifts they all like them such as my friend I gave her a door last year and now he sleep with it every day.

✓ Yes, I frequently give my parents, friends, and classmates gifts. They all like them. For example, I gave my friend a doll last year and now she sleeps with it every day.

复数和单数使用错误。'frequent' 应为副词 'frequently'，'door' 应为 'doll'（根据语境推测），'he' 应为 'she'，因为指代朋友。需要使用复数形式 'parents, friends, classmates' 并且句子结构需要分开以表达清楚。

× I gave her a door last year and now he sleep with it every day.

✓ I gave her a doll last year and now she sleeps with it every day.

动词时态错误。'sleep' 应该用第三人称单数现在时 'sleeps'，因为动作发生在现在且主语是第三人称单数。

× When my parents are birthday I will give them when when my friends get a good grades I will give them.

✓ When it is my parents' birthday, I will give them gifts. When my friends get good grades, I will give them gifts.

复数和单数错误。'parents are birthday' 应为 'parents' birthday'，表示所有格；'a good grades' 中 'grades' 是复数，不应加不定冠词 'a'。

× They all very happy.

✓ They are all very happy.

缺少动词 'are'，导致句子不完整。需要加上系动词 'are' 来构成完整句子。

× When my parents get my birthday present, they are happy to see that because I have a heart about them.

✓ When my parents get my birthday present, they are happy to see it because I care about them.

介词使用错误。'have a heart about them' 不正确，应该用 'care about them' 表达关心。

× I think cheap quality and the looks are all very important because when this gift is too expensive I can't buy it and if it don't have a good quality, my friends will doesn't like it.

✓ I think low price, good quality, and appearance are all very important because if the gift is too expensive, I can't buy it. If it doesn't have good quality, my friends won't like it.

形容词和副词使用错误。'cheap quality' 应为 'low price' 或 'affordable price'，'don't have' 应为 'doesn't have'，'will doesn't like' 应为 'won't like'。

× When it is not beautiful, my friends will doesn't.

✓ When it is not beautiful, my friends won't like it.

代词和动词形式错误。'will doesn't' 是错误的，应该用 'won't like it' 来表达否定将来时。

× Yes, last year my friend gave me a birthday present. It is. He made a flower.

✓ Yes, last year my friend gave me a birthday present. It is a flower he made.

句子结构错误。'It is.' 是不完整句子，应与后句合并为完整句子。

× When I saw it, I can remember my memory of this.

✓ When I see it, I can remember the memory of it.

时态和代词使用错误。'When I saw it' 应与 'can remember' 时态一致，改为 'When I see it'；'my memory of this' 应为 'the memory of it'。

× I don't think so because now I'm 40 years old and I can't to buy some expensive gifts and if the gifts is about the friends truly feelings, it is more than important than the price.

✓ I don't think so because now I'm 40 years old and I can't buy some expensive gifts. If the gifts show my friends' true feelings, that is more important than the price.

情态动词使用错误。'can't to buy' 应为 'can't buy'；'gifts is' 应为 'gifts are'；'about the friends truly feelings' 结构不正确，应改为 'show my friends' true feelings'；'more than important than' 应为 'more important than'。