Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并注意语法和时态一致。避免重复填充词（如 "umm"），并用一到两句清楚表达观点，随后用具体例子说明你的做法。使用正确的动词形式（例如 "give" 的过去分词或现在完成时）并控制句子数量在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at giving gifts. I usually research my friends' hobbies and preferences before choosing something, which can be time-consuming. For example, I once asked a friend about her favorite authors before buying a book she loved.

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并修正不自然表达和词汇错误。避免含糊或错误的短语（如 "demonstrated me as a center"、"small necks"）。用一两句具体描述一次送礼场景，并用连词衔接句子。

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions like Christmas, birthdays and the Spring Festival. For instance, at Christmas I put chocolates and small gifts in stockings and give them to friends, which always makes them happy.

Gợi ý: 内容方向正确，但需改进词汇选择和表达准确性。把冗词去掉，修正搭配（如用 "well-designed" 或 "attractive" 替代 "dedicated"），并用连词使句子更连贯。可以给出更具体的例子来丰富回答。

Ví dụ: When choosing a gift, I consider whether it looks attractive and suits the recipient's hobbies and preferences. For example, if someone loves reading, I would choose a popular novel or a book in their favourite genre.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多且表达重复。使用正确的现在完成时（"I haven't given"），避免重复和多余短语。简洁说明原因并提供一次替代经历或偏好，句子不要超过五句。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't given a handmade gift because I'm not very handy and it takes too much time for me. Instead, I prefer to buy a nicely packaged present that suits the recipient's taste.

Gợi ý: 表达观点时要更清晰并注意词汇准确性（如 "jewelry"、"afford"）。避免矛盾或含糊的句子，使用连接词（however, so）使逻辑更顺畅。可以给出具体例子说明如何用平价礼物表达心意。

Ví dụ: I believe expensive jewelry can show sincerity for some people, but I can't afford it as a student. Therefore I prefer sincere, affordable gifts, like a handwritten letter and a small thoughtful present that shows I care.

× Before I giving a spontaneous gift for my friends, I try to learn about each person's hobbies and preferences and made a strategy for them 1 by 1.

✓ Before giving a spontaneous gift to my friends, I try to learn about each person's hobbies and preferences and make a strategy for them one by one.

句中 'Before I giving' 用法错误，動詞後接 -ing 應用在介詞或連詞後，如 'Before giving'；另外原句在表達習慣性動作時時態應一致，將 'made' 改為現在式 'make' 與 'try' 保持一致；此外 'for my friends' 改為常用搭配 'to my friends'，'1 by 1' 用詞不自然，改為 'one by one'。建議：在 'before' 之後用動名詞（-ing），且注意句子時態一致和常用介詞搭配。

× For instance, at Christmas I just umm, demonstrated me as a center and put some chocolates, candies and some small necks in the Christmas socks and give them they feel happy.

✓ For instance, at Christmas I just, umm, put myself at the center and put some chocolates, candies and small knick-knacks in the Christmas socks to make them feel happy.

原句 'demonstrated me as a center' 用法不當，應用反身代詞 'put myself at the center' 表達置於中央；'small necks' 應為 'small knick-knacks'（小飾品）；句尾 'and give them they feel happy' 結構錯亂，改為目的表達 'to make them feel happy'。建議：使用合適的短語表達位置（put myself at the center），並用不定式或從句表達目的。

× When choosing a gift, uh, I usually consider if the appearance of the gift is dedicated and beautiful.

✓ When choosing a gift, I usually consider whether the appearance of the gift is delicate and beautiful.

原句 'dedicated' 意為『投入的、專門的』，用作描述外觀不合適，正確應為 'delicate'（精緻的）；此外 'if' 在正式用法中可用 'whether' 更清晰。建議：注意形容詞詞義選擇，選用能描述外觀的形容詞如 'delicate' 或 'attractive'。

× I also think about the recipients hobbies and the preferences.

✓ I also think about the recipients' hobbies and preferences.

原句缺少所有格標記，應將 'recipients' 改為所有格 'recipients'' 或 'recipients' hobbies'（recipients'）以表示 '收禮人的嗜好'；另外 'the preferences' 冗餘定冠詞，直接用複數 'preferences' 更自然。建議：注意名詞所有格的標示和對冠詞的簡化。

× No, I haven't give anyone a handmade gift because I'm not a handy person and I'm I'm not good at it.

✓ No, I haven't given anyone a handmade gift because I'm not a handy person and I'm not good at it.

現在完成時需要過去分詞，'give' 的過去分詞是 'given'，因此 'haven't give' 應改為 'haven't given'；另外有重複 'I'm'，刪去重複。建議：複習現在完成時的構成（have/has + 過去分詞）。

× I also think that is true. Too troublesome to me and waste wasting my time.

✓ I also think that's true. It's too troublesome for me and would waste my time.

原句斷句與用詞錯誤：'Too troublesome to me' 應為 'too troublesome for me'；'waste wasting' 重複且時態不當，改為 'would waste my time' 表達假設或結果。建議：注意固定搭配 'troublesome for someone'，避免動詞重複並選擇適當時態。

× Instead I prefer to choose something beautiful and dedicate gifts, which has been demonstrated well.

✓ Instead, I prefer to choose something beautiful and thoughtful as gifts, which have been presented well.

原句 'dedicate' 用法錯誤，應該是形容詞 'thoughtful'（貼心的）；'gifts' 為複數，關係子句中應用複數動詞 'have been' 而非 'has been'；此外 'demonstrated well' 用詞不自然，改為 'presented well'。建議：注意形容詞形式及主謂數一致，選擇地道表達如 'thoughtful gifts'。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

此句原文作為考官提問並無明顯語法錯誤，保留原句。若要改進，可說 'Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?' 以提高語序自然性。建議：可將 'better' 放在句尾以符合英語習慣。

× In my opinion, if I buy some jewelries to recipients, I think the more expensive the better and the more sincere.

✓ In my opinion, if I buy some jewelry for recipients, I think the more expensive, the better and the more sincere they seem.

'jewelries' 非標準複數，正確用法為不可數 'jewelry' 或 'pieces of jewelry'；'to recipients' 應為常用介詞 'for recipients'；另外原句比較級結構需要補主語或使語意完整，添加 'they seem'。建議：使用不可數名詞 'jewelry' 或 'pieces of jewelry'，並注意介詞和比較結構完整性。

× But just for me now I can't afford it because I'm just a student. So I think if I try to choose some gifts, uh, by my real heart, I think it's worth collecting.

✓ But for me now I can't afford it because I'm just a student. So I think if I choose some gifts from my heart, I think they're worth keeping.

原句 'try to choose' 可簡化為 'choose' 表達習慣選擇；'by my real heart' 為不自然表達，改為 'from my heart'；'worth collecting' 與語境不符，應為 'worth keeping' 或 'meaningful to keep'。建議：使用自然搭配 'from my heart' 和 'worth keeping/keeping as memories'。