Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: You need to give a clear, direct topic sentence and then one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear pronouns. Practice sequencing your ideas with linking words (for example, "usually", "however"). Also use correct verb forms (e.g., "I gave") and be specific about who "him" or "her" refers to.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like giving gifts. Usually I buy presents for children in my neighbourhood, but I have only given my sister one gift—a mug for her birthday.

Gợi ý: Your answer is short and relevant, but expand slightly with a linking word and a brief reason or example to make it more natural. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid abruptness.

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on birthdays and at Christmas because those are special occasions when families meet and celebrate.

Gợi ý: Organise your answer: start with a main idea, then give specific examples using linking phrases (e.g., "for adults...", "for children..."). Avoid repeated words and unclear phrases like "adult living things" or "kidly things"; instead say "practical items" or "toys". Mention asking family for advice clearly.

Ví dụ: When choosing a gift, I think about the person's age and interests. For adults I often choose coffee or practical items, and for children I pick toys; if I'm unsure I ask my parents for suggestions.

Gợi ý: Give a direct yes/no and then one clear example. Use correct tense and word order: "I have given" or "I gave" and say who received the handmade gift and what it was. Use a linking word like "for example" to add detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have given handmade gifts. For example, I once made friendship bracelets and gave them to several classmates.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence (e.g., "No, I don't think so") then explain why using a couple of clear reasons. Avoid repetition and contradictory phrases. Mention one or two specific advantages of handmade gifts and finish with a short concluding phrase.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive gifts are better. Handmade gifts feel more personal and meaningful to me, and they show that someone spent time making something just for me.

× Yes, I'm gonna give him gifts. Gifts.

✓ Yes, I'm going to give him gifts.

'Gonna' is informal spoken contraction of 'going to'. In formal written English, use 'going to'. Also avoid repeating 'Gifts.' which is redundant. Use 'going to' to express future intention. (Mongolia): 'gonna' нь албан бус ярилцлагын хэллэг тул бичгийн болон илт тайлбарлахад 'going to' гэж солих хэрэгтэй.

× I get a lot of kids gifts, but I haven't given my sister a gift yet or I given her on her birthday a cup but not that is the only gift I gave her and.

✓ I give a lot of gifts to children, but I haven't given my sister a gift yet. I gave her a cup on her birthday, but that is the only gift I've given her.

Multiple issues: word order and choice ('kids gifts' should be 'gifts to children' or 'children's gifts'), incorrect tense forms and missing auxiliary ('I given her' should be 'I gave her' or 'I've given her'). Sentence run-on and unclear connectors; split into two sentences. Use present simple for habitual actions and present perfect for experience that affects present. (Mongolia): 'kids gifts' гэдгийг 'gifts to children' гэж өөрчилж, 'I given' шиг туслах үйл үг алдааг засаж хоёр өгүүлбэр болгож бичнэ.

× Especially often on their birthdays and on Christmas.

✓ Especially on their birthdays and at Christmas.

Avoid redundant adverbs 'especially often'; choose 'especially' or 'often'. Use preposition 'at' with 'Christmas' and 'on' with 'birthdays'. (Mongolia): 'on Christmas' биш 'at Christmas' гэж хэлдэг, мөн 'especially often' нь давтагдсан утгатай учир товчлох хэрэгтэй.

× If it's an adult I would consider consider giving them coffee or adults adult living things by asking my mom or dad about if it's a kid I give them kidly things as my as I want.

✓ If it's an adult, I would consider giving them coffee or asking my parents about what an adult would like. If it's a child, I give them child-friendly things that I think they will enjoy.

Problems: repeated word 'consider consider', awkward phrase 'adults adult living things', incorrect form 'kidly things', run-on sentence lacking punctuation. Use 'parents' instead of 'mom or dad' for concision, and 'child-friendly' or 'children's' for proper adjective. Split into two sentences for clarity. (Mongolia): 'consider consider' давтагдаж, 'kidly' гэж буруу үг хэрэглэсэн тул 'child-friendly' эсвэл 'children's' гэж засах хэрэгтэй, үгсийг тодорхой болгох болон өгүүлбэрийг салгах шаардлагатай.

× Yes, actually I gave in. A lot of people handmade gifts.

✓ Yes, actually I have given a lot of people handmade gifts.

Original fragments: 'gave in.' is incorrect and 'A lot of people handmade gifts' has wrong word order. Use present perfect 'have given' to indicate experience, and 'handmade gifts' as object: 'given [someone] handmade gifts'. (Mongolia): 'gave in.' буруу таслагдсан ба үгийг зөв дараалалд оруулж 'have given a lot of people handmade gifts' гэж хэлэх хэрэгтэй.

× No homemade, homemade, handmade and homemade gifts actually give me a lot are actually better for me because they're free and I don't want anyone to waste all their money like I I don't like.

✓ No. Homemade or handmade gifts are better for me because they're inexpensive and I don't want anyone to waste all their money.

Run-on, repetition ('homemade' repeated), awkward phrasing 'give me a lot are actually better'. Simplify to a clear negative answer followed by explanation. Use 'inexpensive' instead of 'free' if you mean low cost; if you mean free, keep 'free'. Remove repeated 'I'. (Mongolia): Үгс олон удаа давтагдсан, өгүүлбэрийн бүтэц буруу тул товч, тодорхой хэлбэрт оруулж 'Homemade or handmade gifts are better for me because they're inexpensive and I don't want anyone to waste all their money.' гэж засах хэрэгтэй.