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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at giving gifts?

Thí sinh

Well, I'm fairly good at it. I pay attention to small details in everyday conversation, so when it's time to buy a buy a gift, I usually have some clear idea of what the person would like, such as their hobbies or recent interest.

Giám khảo

When do you usually give gifts to others?

Thí sinh

I usually give guests on special kittens like birthday or weddings. For my friends birthday, I try to buy a thoughtful and meaningful present because I wanna show my appreciation and make the day memorable.

Giám khảo

What do you consider when choosing a gift?

Thí sinh

Are you really think about the person's interest or lifestyle 1st? And I prefer choosing something practical or meaningful rather than something expensive but useless.

Giám khảo

Have you ever given others a handmade gift?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I have. I once made a handwriting card for my birthday's party. I wasn't fancy, but I spent time thinking about what to write so it feel more personal.

Giám khảo

Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

Thí sinh

Not really.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at giving gifts?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰,但存在语法与重复错误(“buy a buy a gift”),句子略长且缺少连接词使逻辑不够紧凑。可以在主题句后用一两处连接词简洁说明如何获取信息,并修正口误。建议练习简短流畅的表达,控制在3-4句内,注意时态和冠词使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'm pretty good at choosing gifts. I listen for small details in conversations, and from those clues I decide what the person would like. For example, if someone mentions a new hobby, I might buy a related book or tool to match their interest.

When do you usually give gifts to others?

Điểm: 61.0

Gợi ý: 内容符合但含明显词汇错误(“guests on special kittens”应为“gifts on special occasions”或类似),另口语缩写“wanna”不够正式。句式可以更简洁并加入连接词如“so”或“because”来增强因果关系。建议纠正词汇错误,使用正式表达,并将句子拆成主题句加一两句具体细节。

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and weddings. For a friend's birthday, I choose a thoughtful present to show my appreciation and help make their day memorable.

What do you consider when choosing a gift?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答有用,但开头像是反问且语法不正确(“Are you really think”),应直接陈述主题句。可以用连接词(for example, so)补充具体考虑的细节,如爱好或日常需要。避免口语化数字“1st”,改为“first”。

Ví dụ: I first consider the person's interests and lifestyle. For example, if they enjoy cooking, I might buy useful kitchen tools, because I prefer practical or meaningful gifts over expensive but useless items.

Have you ever given others a handmade gift?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且有具体细节,但有小错误:可将“handwriting card”改为“handwritten card”,“my birthday's party”应为“a friend's birthday party”或“my birthday party”根据语境;最后句子时态一致性需注意(“so it feel”→“so it felt”)。建议使用正确短语并保持时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, I made a handwritten card for a friend's birthday party. It wasn't fancy, but I spent time thinking about the message so it felt more personal.

Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 回答太简短,缺少扩展和支撑细节,无法展示词汇量或连贯性。即使观点是简单否定,也应给出原因和例子,用连接词如“because”或“for example”。建议将回答扩展为2–3句,提供理由或例子来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Not really. I think the thought behind a gift matters more than its price, because a simple, well-chosen present can show you know the person's tastes and care about them.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I pay attention to small details in everyday conversation, so when it's time to buy a buy a gift, I usually have some clear idea of what the person would like, such as their hobbies or recent interest.

I pay attention to small details in everyday conversation, so when it's time to buy a gift, I usually have a clear idea of what the person would like, such as their hobbies or recent interests.

句中存在重复词“buy a buy a”和“recent interest”与前文复数“hobbies”不一致。这里不是-ing形式错误,但根据可选类型中最接近的为“8: Verb + -ing form”不适用,实为词形和数一致问题,应删去重复并将interest改为复数“interests”。建议注意连贯性与名词单复数一致。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I usually give guests on special kittens like birthday or weddings.

I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

原句中“guests”应为“gifts”(量词/名词错误),并且“kittens”显然是拼写或词误,应为“occasions”。此外,“birthday”与“weddings”数形式不一致,改为复数以匹配泛指。问题属于量词/名词选择错误,建议复查单词拼写和语义。

2: Third person singular issue

× For my friends birthday, I try to buy a thoughtful and meaningful present because I wanna show my appreciation and make the day memorable.

For my friend's birthday, I try to buy a thoughtful and meaningful present because I want to show my appreciation and make the day memorable.

原句中“friends”缺少所有格撇号,应该是“friend's birthday”。此外非正式缩写“wanna”在书面或正式口语中应使用“want to”。这属于代词/所有格与动词形式问题,建议在正式场合使用完整形式并注意所有格标记。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Are you really think about the person's interest or lifestyle 1st?

Do you really think about the person's interests or lifestyle first?

原句中疑问句结构错误,应使用助动词“Do”来构成一般现在时的疑问,“Are you really think”结构不对。另将“interest”改为复数“interests”,并将“1st”写为“first”。这是介词/结构使用不当与名词复数问题,建议复习一般现在时疑问句的构成:Do/Does + 主语 + 动词原形。

9: Verb in the past participle form

× I once made a handwriting card for my birthday's party.

I once made a handwritten card for my birthday party.

“handwriting card”用法不当,应使用形容词“handwritten”修饰card(过去分词作形容词)。同时“birthday's party”不自然,应为“birthday party”。该错误属于过去分词用法错误,建议学习过去分词作形容词的用法。

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× I wasn't fancy, but I spent time thinking about what to write so it feel more personal.

It wasn't fancy, but I spent time thinking about what to write so it felt more personal.

句首主语应为“It”,原句“I wasn't fancy”主语错误。其次“feel”应为过去时“felt”以与主句过去时“spent”一致。此处属于副词/时态与主语使用错误,建议注意句子主语和时态一致性。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

该句语法结构本身可以接受,但更自然的问法是“Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?” 原句中比较副词位置稍显不自然,但并不严重。若改为建议形式,需将副词“better”置于动词短语末尾。建议把“better”放在句末以符合英语习惯:Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
ExpensiveCostly
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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