Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, instead of repeating 'I've had', say 'Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my wallet or only had money in my bank account. Therefore, I usually borrow a few bucks to buy food or drinks.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my wallet or only had money in my bank account. Therefore, I usually borrow a few bucks to buy food or drinks.

Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), focus on correct verb forms and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide clear reasons. For example, say 'Yes, I have lent money to others, especially my friend, because she often forgets things, including her money. So, I usually let her borrow money to buy food.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to others, especially my friend, because she often forgets things, including her money. So, I usually let her borrow money to buy food.

× Yes, I've had I've had borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my money at home or I just don't have money outside, only have it in my bank account.

✓ Yes, I've borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my money at home or I just didn't have money outside, only had it in my bank account.

The phrase 'I've had borrowed' is incorrect because 'had' is unnecessary and causes redundancy. The correct form is 'I've borrowed' (present perfect). Also, 'don't have' should be in past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context. Use 'had' for past possession instead of 'have'. Suggestion: Use 'I've borrowed' to express past experience and keep tense consistent.

× So I tend to just borrow them a few bucks so I can buy food or drinks.

✓ So I tend to just borrow a few bucks from them so I can buy food or drinks.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used as the object of 'borrow'. The correct structure is 'borrow something from someone'. Here, 'a few bucks' is the object borrowed, and 'them' refers to the people from whom money is borrowed. So, 'borrow a few bucks from them' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'borrow a few bucks from them' to clarify the object and source.

× Of course, I've had lent my money to others, especially my friend, because she is a very forgettable person.

✓ Of course, I've lent my money to others, especially my friend, because she is a very forgetful person.

The phrase 'I've had lent' is incorrect; 'have lent' is the correct present perfect form. Also, 'forgettable' means easy to forget, but the intended meaning is that she often forgets things, so 'forgetful' is the correct adjective. Suggestion: Use 'I've lent' for correct verb form and 'forgetful' to describe a person who forgets things.

× She. Always forget things, especially when it comes with her money, so I usually let her borrow my money to buy food.

✓ She always forgets things, especially when it comes to her money, so I usually let her borrow my money to buy food.

The sentence has a period after 'She' which is incorrect; it should be one sentence. 'Forget' should be 'forgets' to agree with third person singular subject 'She'. The phrase 'comes with her money' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'comes to her money'. Suggestion: Combine into one sentence, use 'forgets' for subject-verb agreement, and 'comes to' for correct preposition.