Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하며, 불필요한 정보는 제거하고 핵심 내용에 집중하세요. 예를 들어, 'I borrowed money from my sister when I was in high school because I lost my wallet and had no cash or cards.'처럼 말하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I borrowed money from my sister when I was in high school because I lost my wallet and had no cash or cards with me.

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접적으로 답변하지 않고, 빌린 경험에 대해 반복해서 말하고 있습니다. 질문에 맞게 '돈을 빌려준 경험'에 대해 구체적으로 답변하고, 문법과 표현을 자연스럽게 개선하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I have lent money to my friends when they needed help, and I always expect them to pay me back on time.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to my friends when they needed help, and I always expect them to pay me back on time.

× Hawaii have borrowed my money from my sister.

✓ I have borrowed money from my sister.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Hawaii' instead of 'I' and 'have' with a singular subject. The subject should be 'I' and 'have' is correct with 'I'. Also, 'my money' is correct but the sentence structure is wrong. Correcting to 'I have borrowed money from my sister.' fixes the subject and verb agreement and clarifies the meaning.

× Because it was when I was a high school student, I didn't have.

✓ Because I was a high school student, I didn't have any money.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'Because it was when I was a high school student' is not a proper clause. The correction removes 'it was' and completes the sentence by specifying what was not had, i.e., 'any money'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I lost my wallet so I had no car, no cash, so I borrowed from my sister.

✓ I lost my wallet so I had no cash, so I borrowed from my sister.

The phrase 'I had no car' is likely incorrect in context; probably the speaker meant 'no card'. 'Car' is a singular noun but does not fit the context. Changing 'car' to 'card' corrects the meaning. Also, the sentence is a run-on and can be improved by removing redundancy, but the main grammatical issue is the incorrect noun.

× I have yes.

✓ Yes, I have.

The phrase 'I have yes' is incorrect word order for affirming a question. The correct form is 'Yes, I have.' which uses the modal verb 'have' properly in response to the question.

× I asked her to let me some money.

✓ I asked her to lend me some money.

The verb 'let' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lend' when referring to giving money temporarily. 'Let' means to allow, but 'lend' is the proper verb for money transactions. Also, 'to let me some money' is ungrammatical; 'to lend me some money' is correct.

× She's kindly help me out and I paid her back as soon as I could.

✓ She kindly helped me out and I paid her back as soon as I could.

The contraction 'She's' (she is) is incorrect here; the past tense 'helped' is needed. Also, 'kindly' is an adverb modifying 'helped'. The correct sentence uses 'She kindly helped me out'. This fixes the pronoun and verb tense errors.