Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和语法准确性，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习使用简单且完整的句子，明确表达借钱的原因和具体细节，同时避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from my close friends before because I faced a financial emergency. For example, last summer my computer broke down, and I needed money to repair it since it is essential for my studies. Without it, I couldn't complete my assignments.

Gợi ý: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯，信息不完整。建议练习用完整句子表达借钱的原因和具体情况，使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to others when they faced financial emergencies. For example, my close friend suddenly got sick and needed money for medical treatment, so I lent her some money to help.

× Before because I faced a financial emergency.

✓ Because I faced a financial emergency before.

句子中时间状语位置不当，应该将时间状语放在句首或句尾，使句子更通顺。这里将'before'放在句尾更符合英语习惯。

× they need the money to repair it since it is essential devices for my studies and no work.

✓ they needed the money to repair it since it is an essential device for my studies and work.

'devices'是复数，但前面用的是单数指代'it'，应保持一致。且'no work'表达不清，改为'work'更合适。

× With all that I couldn't complete assembly.

✓ Because of all that, I couldn't complete the assembly.

原句结构不完整，缺少连接词和冠词，导致句意不明。加上'Because of'和'the'使句子完整且清晰。

× Yes, I will lend them money to others becauses they are Yeah, financial emergency, for example.

✓ Yes, I would lend them money because they have a financial emergency, for example.

此处描述过去或假设情况，应使用情态动词'would'而非将来时'will'，且'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。

× Lots of sub well my better friends suddenly getting sick and she needed money to.

✓ Many of my close friends suddenly got sick and they needed money.

'Lots of sub well my better friends'表达混乱，改为'Many of my close friends'更准确；'she'与复数主语不符，改为'they'。

× Medical retreat mental I learned some money to her I think this is a.

✓ I lent her some money for medical treatment. I think this is important.

原句语序混乱，缺少必要的连接词和完整句子，调整语序并补充缺失部分使句子通顺。