Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to use correct verb tenses and clearer vocabulary. Also, organize your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I have borrowed money from my sister because she is kind and compassionate. She usually lends me money for school bills or when I want to go shopping." This makes your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from my sister because she is kind and compassionate. She usually lends me money to pay for school bills or when I want to go shopping. For instance, last month I asked her for some money to buy books for my classes.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, make your answer more coherent by linking ideas properly. For example, say "Yes, I have lent money to my close friends several times because some of them come from poor families. Besides lending money, I also help them by giving rides to school. This helps me stay connected with them."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to my close friends several times because some of them come from poor families. Besides lending money, I often give them rides to school or help them with other needs. This way, I can support them and maintain our friendship.

× Yes I have borrow money from my sister because she is kind and compassionate.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money from my sister because she is kind and compassionate.

The verb 'borrow' should be in the past participle form 'borrowed' to correctly form the present perfect tense 'have borrowed'. In English, after 'have' or 'has', the past participle form of the verb is used to indicate completed actions.

× She always lend me some money to spend on my fax ilities things.

✓ She always lends me some money to spend on my facilities' things.

The verb 'lend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'lends' because the subject 'She' is third person singular and the adverb 'always' indicates habitual action. Also, 'fax ilities' seems to be a misspelling of 'facilities'. The possessive form 'facilities'' is used to show ownership of the things.

× She always lend me some money to spend on my fax ilities things.

✓ She always lends me some money to spend on my facilities' things.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used here to indicate the purpose of spending money. However, the phrase 'fax ilities things' is incorrect; it should be 'facilities' things' to indicate things related to facilities.

× I would say it's a school bill for example when I want to go shopping and I usually ask her for learn thing me some money so that I can go on it to buy.

✓ I would say it's a school bill, for example, when I want to go shopping and I usually ask her to lend me some money so that I can go and buy it.

The phrase 'ask her for learn thing me some money' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'ask her to lend me some money' because 'ask' is followed by an object and an infinitive verb. Also, 'go on it to buy' is awkward; 'go and buy it' is the correct expression. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× Yes, I have land money to my close friend several times because some of my friends are not in a rich family so.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to my close friend several times because some of my friends are not from a rich family.

The verb 'land' is incorrect; the past participle of 'lend' is 'lent'. Also, 'not in a rich family' should be 'not from a rich family' to correctly express origin or background.

× Yes, I have land money to my close friend several times because some of my friends are not in a rich family so.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to my close friend several times because some of my friends are not from a rich family.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'from' is used to indicate origin or background. Hence, 'not from a rich family' is the correct phrase.

× To share with them, I always give them what I have, like a closed school facility, give them a lift or get them home.

✓ To share with them, I always give them what I have, like access to school facilities, give them a lift, or take them home.

The phrase 'like a closed school facility' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'like access to school facilities' to make sense. Also, the sentence needs parallel structure: 'give them a lift' and 'take them home' instead of 'get them home'.

× So this is a great opportunity for me to stay in touch with.

✓ So this is a great opportunity for me to stay in touch with them.

The sentence ends abruptly without an object after 'with'. The pronoun 'them' is needed to complete the phrase 'stay in touch with them'.