Part 1
Giám khảo
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. At that time, I was facing the financial difficulties and I can't afford for my daily expenses. So I asked for my friend to lend me some money to deal with the difficulty situations. Fortunately, he was very kind.
Giám khảo
Have you ever lent money to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have lent money to others before, because I believe that helping each other is a very important virtue. So if I have some close friends, they are meeting financial difficulties, I will help them and give my support and assistance without hesitations. I think it's a good way to express our emotions.
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“can't afford for”应为“couldn't afford”,“difficulty situations”应为“difficult situations”。建议注意时态一致性和词汇搭配,同时回答可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. At that time, I was facing financial difficulties and couldn't afford my daily expenses. So, I asked a friend to lend me some money to get through that tough period. Fortunately, he was very kind and helped me.
Have you ever lent money to others?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误,如“they are meeting financial difficulties”应为“they are facing financial difficulties”,以及“without hesitations”应为“without hesitation”。建议简化句子结构,注意语法准确性,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to others before because I believe helping each other is very important. If my close friends face financial difficulties, I will support them without hesitation. I think this is a good way to show care and strengthen our friendship.
× At that time, I was facing the financial difficulties and I can't afford for my daily expenses.
✓ At that time, I was facing financial difficulties and I couldn't afford my daily expenses.
句子中描述的是过去的情况,应该使用过去时态。'can't'是现在时,应该改为过去时的'couldn't'。此外,'afford for'是不正确的搭配,'afford'后面直接接名词即可。
× So I asked for my friend to lend me some money to deal with the difficulty situations.
✓ So I asked my friend to lend me some money to deal with the difficult situations.
'ask for'通常后接请求的对象或物品,这里应直接用'ask my friend'表示请求朋友帮忙。'difficulty situations'搭配不当,应改为'difficult situations'。
× So if I have some close friends, they are meeting financial difficulties, I will help them and give my support and assistance without hesitations.
✓ So if I have some close friends who are facing financial difficulties, I will help them and give my support and assistance without hesitation.
原句中两个分句之间缺少连接词,应该用'who are'引导定语从句。'without hesitations'中'hesitations'应为不可数名词,改为'single'形式'hestitation'。