Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Sua resposta está confusa e pouco clara. Tente estruturar sua resposta com uma frase principal clara e depois explique a situação com detalhes específicos, usando palavras de ligação para melhorar a coerência. Evite repetir palavras e mantenha a resposta dentro de cinco frases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from my sister once. It was because I forgot my wallet when I went to the supermarket. Fortunately, she lent me some cash, and I paid her back the next day.

Gợi ý: A resposta está difícil de entender devido à estrutura gramatical incorreta e falta de clareza. Para melhorar, responda diretamente e explique a situação com detalhes específicos, usando conectores para tornar a resposta mais fluida e natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to my sister before. She needed some cash because she didn't have any at that moment, so I helped her out. I trust her to pay me back soon.

× Yes, I I borrowed money in my sister because I know work, I have money, I have cash and I may I am going supermarket and I now have money in my sister borrowed my money and to go.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from my sister because I didn't have money. Now, I have money because I went to the supermarket and my sister lent me money to go.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. It contains run-on sentences and unclear references. The correction breaks the ideas into clear, complete sentences and uses appropriate prepositions and verb tenses to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, as I do my sister before no have money I ever lend the money in my system.

✓ Yes, I lent money to my sister before because she didn't have money.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('in my system' is incorrect) and has incorrect verb forms. The correction uses the correct preposition 'to' with 'lend' and corrects the verb tense and sentence structure to clearly express the intended meaning.