Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, make your sentences more natural and coherent by using linking words. For example, instead of repeating 'borrowed money from them', you can say 'I borrowed money to buy a bike and returned it on time, which made them happy.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before, specifically to buy a bike. I borrowed the money for a few months and returned it on time, which made them happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and is somewhat confusing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you can say 'Yes, I have lent money to others during their difficult times, but unfortunately, they often do not return it. However, when I borrow money, I always repay it on time.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to others during their crisis moments, but they often do not return it. However, when I borrow money, I always repay it on time.

× Yes, I have borrowed money from others and it was for buying my bike for a few months.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from others to buy my bike a few months ago.

The sentence mixes present perfect ('have borrowed') with a specific past time reference ('for a few months'), which is incorrect. Use simple past tense 'borrowed' to indicate a completed action in the past with a specific time.

× So there was happy to bring back their money in time.

✓ So I was happy to bring back their money on time.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and uses 'there was happy' incorrectly. Adding the subject 'I' and correcting the phrase to 'was happy' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I had lend money to others in their crisis moment.

✓ Yes, I lent money to others in their moment of crisis.

The verb 'lend' should be in the simple past form 'lent' to correctly indicate a past action. Also, 'had lend' is incorrect; 'had lent' would be past perfect but is unnecessary here.

× But the fact is they take it for a time, but they don't return anytime.

✓ But the fact is they take it for some time, but they don't return it anytime soon.

The verb 'take' should be in present tense to match 'the fact is'. Adding 'some' before 'time' and 'it' after 'return' improves clarity and correctness.

× But when I take the money, I'll give them money and give them back their money on time.

✓ But when I take the money, I will give it back to them on time.

The sentence is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'I will give it back to them on time' correctly uses future tense and avoids repetition.

× So I have I had lent money to others.

✓ So I have lent money to others.

The phrase 'I have I had lent' is incorrect and redundant. Using 'I have lent' (present perfect) is appropriate to indicate experience up to now.