Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“whether borrow me some money”应改为“if she could lend me some money”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。可以使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Once in senior high school, I forgot my wallet after school and the school was already closed. So, I asked my best friend if she could lend me some money, and she agreed without hesitation. I really appreciated her kindness.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“whether I could borrow some money to her”应为“if I could lend her some money”。此外，表达“she is a rude and honest girl”矛盾且不礼貌，建议用更合适的词汇表达。回答应更简洁且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was in primary school, a girl asked me if I could lend her some money, and I agreed. Unfortunately, she never paid me back, which made me feel disappointed.

× I remember that when I was in Senior High School once after I get off the school, I found I didn't bring my wallet and the school is closed off.

✓ I remember that when I was in Senior High School once after I got off the school, I found I hadn't brought my wallet and the school was closed.

这里涉及过去时态的使用错误。'get off' 应该用过去式 'got off'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。'didn't bring' 应改为过去完成时 'hadn't brought'，因为钱包丢失发生在过去某一时间之前。'is closed off' 应改为过去时 'was closed'，因为描述的是过去的状态。建议在叙述过去事件时，保持时态一致，正确使用过去时和过去完成时。

× So I asked my best friends whether borrow me some money and she agreed without hesitation.

✓ So I asked my best friend whether she could lend me some money and she agreed without hesitation.

这里代词使用错误。'best friends' 应为单数 'best friend'，因为后文用的是 'she' 指代单一对象。'whether borrow me' 结构不正确，应该是 'whether she could lend me'，即询问对方是否能借钱给我。建议注意代词的一致性和正确的动词搭配。

× So I'm very appreciate their her action.

✓ So I really appreciate her action.

'I'm very appreciate' 结构错误，'appreciate' 是动词，不能直接用在 'am' 后面。应改为 'I really appreciate'。'their her action' 代词混用，应统一为 'her action'。建议注意动词和形容词、副词的正确搭配及代词的一致性。

× Yes, I remember that when I in the primary school once a girl asked me whether I could borrow some money to her and I agreed but unfortunately she didn't pay me the money.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was in primary school once a girl asked me whether I could lend her some money and I agreed but unfortunately she didn't pay me back.

'when I in the primary school' 缺少动词，应为 'when I was in primary school'。'could borrow some money to her' 结构错误，应该是 'could lend her some money'，因为借钱是借给别人。'didn't pay me the money' 建议加上 'back' 表示还钱。建议注意动词的正确形式和搭配。

× So I think she is a rude and honest girl.

✓ So I think she is a rude and dishonest girl.

'rude and honest' 语义矛盾，既说她无礼又说她诚实，结合上下文应为 'rude and dishonest'，表示她无礼且不诚实。建议根据语境选择合适的形容词。