Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I always save money in my piggy bank. For example, last year, when a friend needed money to buy a laptop but couldn't afford it, I lent him some money instead. This habit helps me manage my finances independently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes that reduce clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with appropriate linking words. Make sure your sentences are complete and avoid redundancy to improve coherence and effectiveness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to others several times. For instance, last year, a friend needed money to buy a laptop but couldn't afford it due to financial difficulties. Since I save money regularly, I lent him the amount, and he repaid me promptly.

× No, in my life I don't need.

✓ No, in my life I have never needed to.

The sentence is about a past experience, so the modal verb 'don't need' is incorrect. The correct form is 'have never needed to' to express past experience.

× I don't need to borrow money from somebody because I it is one of my habit of creatures to collected the money in my Piggy Bank so whenever I need it, I get from there.

✓ I don't need to borrow money from somebody because it is one of my habits to collect money in my Piggy Bank, so whenever I need it, I get it from there.

The pronoun 'I it' is incorrect and redundant. Also, 'habit of creatures' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my habits'. The verb 'collected' should be in base form 'collect' after 'to'. Added 'it' after 'get' for clarity.

× I will be able to remember that last year one of my friends need need money to purchase the laptop, yet because of their poor financial condition he never bought it.

✓ I remember that last year one of my friends needed money to purchase a laptop, but because of his poor financial condition, he never bought it.

The phrase 'will be able to remember' is incorrect for past events; simple past 'remember' is appropriate. 'Need need' is a repetition and should be 'needed' in past tense. 'The laptop' should be 'a laptop' as it is mentioned for the first time. 'Their' should be 'his' to agree with 'one of my friends'.

× At that time I used it to help them and in turn.

✓ At that time, I used my money to help him in return.

The pronouns 'it' and 'them' are unclear and inconsistent. 'It' should refer to 'my money' and 'them' should be 'him' to agree with 'one of my friends'. 'In turn' is better expressed as 'in return'.

× Other yes, of course, many a times I have lent my money to other.

✓ Yes, of course, many times I have lent my money to others.

'Other' is incorrect here; it should be 'others' as plural. 'Many a times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'many times'.

× As I mentioned it, I it's one of my habit to collect the money in my Piggy Bank, so whenever anybody need it, I prefer to lend to him.

✓ As I mentioned, it's one of my habits to collect money in my Piggy Bank, so whenever anybody needs it, I prefer to lend to them.

'As I mentioned it' is incorrect; 'it' is unnecessary. 'I it's' is incorrect; should be 'it's'. 'Habit' should be plural 'habits'. 'Anybody need' should be 'anybody needs' for subject-verb agreement. 'Lend to him' is better as 'lend to them' for gender neutrality.

× I will remember that last year one of my friend need a money becau to purchase the laptop, but due to poor financial conditions he never purchased the at a time.

✓ I remember that last year one of my friends needed money to purchase a laptop, but due to poor financial conditions, he never purchased it at that time.

'Will remember' is incorrect for past events; simple past 'remember' is correct. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'one of my friends'. 'Need a money' is incorrect; should be 'needed money'. 'Becau' is a typo for 'because'. 'The laptop' should be 'a laptop'. 'The at a time' is incorrect; should be 'it at that time'.

× I lend him and he returns to me within a.

✓ I lent him money and he returned it to me within a short time.

'Lend' and 'returns' are present tense; past tense 'lent' and 'returned' are needed to match the past context. The sentence is incomplete; added 'money' and 'within a short time' for clarity.