Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ve etkili, ancak "However" bağlacından sonra cümleniz biraz uzun ve karmaşık olmuş. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kullanarak ifadeyi güçlendirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, "I believe it is important to share" ifadesini biraz daha açıklayarak detaylandırabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: No, I have never borrowed money from my friends or family because I manage my expenses carefully. However, sometimes my friends borrow money from me when they are in need. I am always happy to help because I believe sharing is important in friendships.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "Learnt" kelimesi yanlış kullanılmış ve cümle yapısı karışık. Ayrıca, sayılar için "7K" ve "10K" gibi kısaltmalar yerine tam ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Cümlenizi daha açık ve düzgün yapılarla kurmalısınız.

Ví dụ: Yes, I lent money to my mom and sister when they were going through a difficult time. I asked if they needed financial help, and they agreed. So, I gave them seven thousand and ten thousand units of currency to support them.

× Yes I learnt my mom and my sister and they are was having a bad time in this period so I told them do you need money or do you want me to help you?

✓ Yes, I lent money to my mom and my sister because they were having a bad time during this period, so I asked them, 'Do you need money or do you want me to help you?'

The verb 'learnt' is incorrectly used instead of 'lent', which is the past tense of 'lend'. Also, 'they are was having' is incorrect; it should be 'they were having' to correctly use the past continuous tense. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas and quotation marks for direct speech.