Money— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "we was going to the coffee", bạn nên nói "we go to a coffee shop". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "school supplies" thay vì "school facility".

Ví dụ: Yes, I have borrowed money from my mother several times. For example, when I go out with my friends to the cinema or a coffee shop, I sometimes need extra money. Also, I have borrowed money to buy school supplies. Therefore, I ask my mother to lend me money to cover these expenses.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Ví dụ, "I'm under 80" không rõ nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói "I'm under 18". Hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác như "income" thay vì "revenue" và "school supplies" thay vì "buy a school". Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Actually, I have never lent money to others because I am under 18 and do not have my own income. My money comes from my family, so I need to save it for daily expenses like food and school supplies.

× Yes, I have borrowed money from my mother.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money from my mother.

This sentence is correct. The past participle 'borrowed' is properly used with the present perfect tense 'have borrowed' to indicate an action that happened at an unspecified time before now.

× When I hang out with my friend, we are going to the cinema or we was going to the coffee or sometime I have to buy a school facility.

✓ When I hang out with my friend, we go to the cinema or we go to a coffee shop, or sometimes I have to buy school supplies.

The sentence has plural and singular agreement issues and incorrect word choices. 'We was' should be 'we are' or better 'we go' to match the habitual action. 'The coffee' is incorrect; it should be 'a coffee shop'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'School facility' is incorrect; 'school supplies' is the correct term for items needed for school.

× So I have to borrow mother monies to afford that.

✓ So I have to borrow money from my mother to afford that.

'Monies' is a plural form but rarely used in everyday speech; 'money' is uncountable and preferred here. Also, 'borrow mother monies' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'borrow money from my mother'.

× Actually is not because now I'm under 80 so I don't have my own revenue so my money came from my family.

✓ Actually, it is not because I am under 18, so I don't have my own income; my money comes from my family.

The sentence lacks a subject ('it') and has tense inconsistency ('came' should be 'comes'). 'Under 80' is likely a typo for 'under 18'. 'Revenue' is not appropriate for personal income; 'income' is better. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I have to save my money to enforce everything for my day of like food, buy a school, supplying for anything else.

✓ I have to save my money to cover everything for my day, like food, school expenses, and supplies for anything else.

'Enforce' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'cover' meaning to pay for expenses. 'Buy a school' is incorrect; it should be 'school expenses'. The phrase 'supplying for anything else' is awkward; 'supplies for anything else' is better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.