Money— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Thí sinh
Say pause. For example, when I go to the lunch with my colleagues, I borrow some money, still pay the lunch and but I usually get money back soon to my colleagues.
Giám khảo
Have you ever lent money to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. I lend my money to my family, such as my husband. He spent many, much of money and he usually borrowed me money. But yeah, we can get my money back.
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Part 1
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容もやや冗長です。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。例えば、主語と動詞の一致、前置詞の使い方、時制の統一に注意しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, when I go to lunch with my colleagues, I sometimes borrow money to pay, but I usually pay them back quickly.
Have you ever lent money to others?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。特に、動詞の時制や前置詞の使い方に注意し、より具体的で論理的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。接続詞を使って文の流れをスムーズにすることも大切です。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I often lend money to my family, especially my husband, who sometimes spends a lot. However, he always pays me back eventually.
Ngữ pháp
× Say pause.
✓ Say 'pause'.
The phrase 'Say pause.' is unclear and seems to be an instruction rather than part of the answer. If it is intended as a command, it should be in quotes to indicate the word to say. Otherwise, it is not a proper sentence in this context.
× when I go to the lunch with my colleagues, I borrow some money, still pay the lunch and but I usually get money back soon to my colleagues.
✓ When I go to lunch with my colleagues, I borrow some money, still pay for the lunch, but I usually get the money back from my colleagues soon.
The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'get money back'; the correct preposition is 'from'. Also, 'go to the lunch' should be 'go to lunch' as 'lunch' here is an uncountable meal event. 'Pay the lunch' should be 'pay for the lunch' because 'pay for' is the correct collocation.
× He spent many, much of money and he usually borrowed me money.
✓ He spent a lot of money and he usually borrows money from me.
'Many' and 'much' are incorrectly used together and with 'of money'. The correct quantifier is 'a lot of money'. Also, 'borrowed me money' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'borrows money from me'.
× He spent many, much of money and he usually borrowed me money.
✓ He spends a lot of money and he usually borrows money from me.
The verb 'spent' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'spends' is appropriate. Similarly, 'borrowed' should be 'borrows' to indicate habitual action.
× But yeah, we can get my money back.
✓ But yeah, we can get my money back.
This sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition error here.
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